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Feligriffin — Warptide Night - Unexpected turn of events

Published: 2015-10-29 03:57:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 1766; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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As a mod, I'm not eligible for winning, so this is just for fun! I hope you like it
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    I felt the cold night air pass through us as we fled, my mind in a whirl of thoughts as my wounded pride still bled. It was a mixture of frustration, searing pain of my burns and anger boiling in my head, but at the same time I tried to stay calm. The overwhelming weight of my own impotence hung on my shoulders, I felt completely useless... Those damn wisps, why was it was so hard to fight them? Even though in a way, it was pretty stupid trying to fight the spirits of flames with my own hands.

   Cameo followed dutifully behind me as we ran until we outwitted the wisps that ambushed us completely. Trying to convince her to retreat was decidedly less difficult than to convince myself, I won’t lie. In a situation like that, I couldn’t just leave my friend roasting to death by her own stubbornness, so I had to be sensible this time .

   ... But the fact of not being able to protect her still gnawed my insides.

   We stopped in a clearing, while the pain of our recent burns was tempered by the cold wind that cut through the night. I took a second look back, checking if we had been followed. Releasing the tension, I managed to say between gasps.

   “Damn, that was a close one... Are you ok, Cam?”

   She simply nodded, the look on her face said more than words ever could. She was just as frustrated as myself, two strong girls like us being outnumbered and outmatched in the same day? I’d say that was impossible not too long ago, but was soon to be proven terribly mistaken. We stood in a quite awkward silence, avoiding eye contact as I couldn't think of anything else to say. I moaned slightly in pain as I felt the burns sting, it was like that day... the day I dug the wrong way, and got awful cuts. It was the second time my lack of knowledge was hurting me... Hopefully it wouldn't leave any scars this time. I didn't need any other reminders of my own stupidity.

   As we rested in silence, I noticed something approach us... It seemed like a bipedal, red colored wyngro. In the dark night I could barely recognize anyone, so I couldn't remember if I saw him before. I just realized we had acquaintances when he started to speak.

    “Hey, you two!!” He ran towards us really clumsily, like if he was about to trip over, probably still getting used to being bipedal. He then stopped running and held his index finger up, supporting himself on his knees as he panted to regain breath. We just stared in shock the unusual guy, was he being chased by wisps or something?

   He then relaxed, standing up proudly before he started to speak again.

    “I heard some screams from that house over there! There's a family trapped in the fire!” His eyes were filled with both worry and plead.  “I need your help... please...” He approached us, and I gave a step back warily. “You two seem so strong! Please, people are in danger!”

   The surprise expression soon changed to a smile. Strong? Did he really think so? Well, I guess we were the best for the case in the end, heh! I looked at Cameo and she also smiled. In the end I guess it was pretty easy to bribe us to do something, haha.

    “Heh, ok dude, don't worry. Where are the—” And then screams erupted from somewhere not too far away from there. I stared into the distance and saw a huge cloud of black smog over a wooden house that was being turned to ashes. However, the family managed to escape without any apparent help. The mother carried the crying child in her arms as she and the father ran away… So who was screaming? It was a very feminine voice apparently.

    Judging by the red one’s reaction, he figured what was going on, as he screamed with all his lungs.

    “NYMBLE!!” He seemed like he was about to have a panic attack, his desperate expression getting worse as he looked around the place. “Oh my God, I told him to stay here!! Ahhh!! He must be in there!!” I watched him start jumping in place, absolutely unsure on what to do. Suddenly Cameo jumped into action, running towards the burning house and I followed her lead.

    “Come on, we have no time to lose!” I said as we dashed towards the house. Meanwhile the red one fell behind and tried to follow us but was not as fast. Cameo looked at me for a brief moment and our eyes met, determination overflowing from her as I smirked back and nodded.

    “Let’s do this.”


Ahhh ok, let me tell you
This was WAY TOO MUCH FUN TO WORK ON! Omg x'D I hope I portrayed all the characters right!
So, in order of appearance:

 Cameo   ticticai
 Anina    Me!
 Djehuti   Ascynd
 Nymble (as he was mentioned)   Nestly

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Comments: 19

Nestly [2015-11-03 23:56:53 +0000 UTC]

If you wanna change your previous and next to these so people could follow the story correctly, that'd be awesome! :]

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ticticai [2015-10-30 01:25:25 +0000 UTC]

Aw yeah aw yeah AW YEAH

Looks great, especially those cool backgrounds! The expressions are even better in color.

Out of the fire and...into another fire! Oops! 
omg Anina someone comes screaming to you for help and your first reaction is to go 'haha yeah I'm so strong'

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Feligriffin In reply to ticticai [2015-10-30 01:51:16 +0000 UTC]

AWWW YEEA! 8D

Thanks man, I'm glad you like it! It was really fun to make the comic haha!

Anina is a simple wyngro, she is complimented, she helps! 8D

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Ascynd [2015-10-29 23:42:23 +0000 UTC]

I love it! It looks so clean and neat and professional and makes me want to read more, hahha...

Poor Djehuti, he isn't cowardly but he doesn't know how to handle these situations yet. He will probably gain some competence and experience from this, however.

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Feligriffin In reply to Ascynd [2015-10-30 01:40:24 +0000 UTC]

Hehe I'm glad you like it! ;v; Ahhh I'm glad you think so!

Exactly, I sorta wanted to show that xD he isn't a coward, he just don't know how to handle the situation! I'm sure he will hehe!

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Nestly [2015-10-29 18:04:40 +0000 UTC]

Loved reading the story! Time to get PUMPED! YEAH ACTION TIME WHOO!  >8D

The comic is awesome and so clean and perfect too! Love the lighting in the dark, night time scene, and the details like the stars and grass blades. <3
So yeah super well done!! <3
And for some reason I am highly amused by all the little shiny icons used in the description, bwahaha. Those (c) icons are neat. I'll have to pretty my next entry up like that too.

Also I would total your comic coin count up to 12 rather than 8. I think that feels much more appropriate.

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Feligriffin In reply to Nestly [2015-10-29 18:44:21 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I'm glad you liked it ~ hell yeah, action time!! >8D

Hah, thank you so much! ;v; The "lighting" is actually their original base color, heh. Used that "sculpting from shades" technique I saw from you, but in a simpler way |'D

Haha, I was just lazy to Google for the symbol and copy paste so I searched for copyright in the dA emoticons and choose the better option. I'm glad you like it though!

Also thank you so much ;v; I'll update it with that!

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zetina [2015-10-29 15:11:33 +0000 UTC]

it's the tough baes beginning their Warptide super hero activities :'D
it's gr8 to get a look in Anina's head yes

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Feligriffin In reply to zetina [2015-10-29 18:02:39 +0000 UTC]

Haha, indeed! :'D Thank you!

Yeah I wanted to show how self-conscious and thoughtful she can be, since her speech don't really give that away PFFT

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zetina In reply to Feligriffin [2015-10-29 18:53:17 +0000 UTC]

heh it's the subtle things that are the most rewarding to explore in a character... and then the audience doesn't even notice but they feel it

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Feligriffin In reply to zetina [2015-10-31 18:48:14 +0000 UTC]

I know right? That's what make character creation so much fun :'3

It can be really hard to bring your character out of your head completely so people can understand how they actually are, heh.

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zetina In reply to Feligriffin [2015-10-31 20:58:06 +0000 UTC]

yeah it's like u have to understand your character yourself first \D

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SabreMushy [2015-10-29 08:38:53 +0000 UTC]

somebody call 911

shorty fire burnin over yonder

WOOOOOO!

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Feligriffin In reply to SabreMushy [2015-10-29 18:03:57 +0000 UTC]

PFFT

WEE OO WEE OO //HIT

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bubbles46853 [2015-10-29 04:13:12 +0000 UTC]

Poor things...

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Feligriffin In reply to bubbles46853 [2015-10-29 18:14:16 +0000 UTC]

Yeah... But they'll be fine, don't worry. =v=

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bubbles46853 In reply to Feligriffin [2015-10-29 18:34:03 +0000 UTC]

If you say so...

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knux33 [2015-10-29 04:04:18 +0000 UTC]

"It was a very feminine voice apparently." PFFFFFFFF--

Beautiful x'D

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Feligriffin In reply to knux33 [2015-10-29 04:14:54 +0000 UTC]

Haha x'D I'm glad you like it~

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