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Ohnoes - and are you already starting to recognize some hyenas of the previous pages? - Hint: the black one has appeared only vaguely.
Special thanks to , as beta-readers, the many hyenas as models and of course all the people on DA for helpful tips!
Art, northern hyena species, characters and story by me. Please don't copy and/or use it without my permission!
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Awws I like the lighter one... I can see him betraying the other hyenas at some point
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She better betray them hyenas
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It's a female XD I like her too - but it's hard to choose between the characters
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The bright one looks a bit more thoughtful and friendly. And the black one is a realist... different personalities yay
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I really adore your hyenas!
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Oooooh, that black one is gooooooorgeous, and I can see that the tension is beginning to mount! 
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Yeheah sure!! adn thinkgs will get pretty complicated! The black hyena is Troy btw
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Hehe I see that your watchers are also good betareaders 
I must say that the blurry effect of the mountain in the fourth panel looks great: it adds speed in a 2D pic!
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Yeah sure - therefore I have to thank everybody hehe! Oeh and takkies for the compiment anyway
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You get to know him better later on XD
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Does the one with the hair flowing down his/her neck have a special feeling in her heart for yves? That one seems to always have a more gentle sympathetic look on the face. *dont worry if it's spoiler* and the black one is pretty!
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Some are indeed more kind than others - but you never know in such war situations...You get to know the hyenas better hehe. Oh I guess you want to know the names? from left to right on the upper most panel: Sabi, Tania and Troy. As for on page 11: Sabi, Tania, Troy, Tycho, Varran.
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oh thank you! that really helps! thanks! and so I will keep my eyes *and possibly my heart* open!
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[link] - but in the intro you can also read something about it
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Sweet~ And yeah; these hyenas are starting to look very easy to tell apart now >w<
I have one suggestion; I can read the text, but I have to focus on it. Perhaps a darker outlining of the letters would be better, and make it easier for folks like me with not-the-best eyesight to see without straining? C:
I love how the hyenas have decided to cut their losses ... with a bit of protest. In war, stuff like this is bound to happen: leaving a man behind, even if he's useful. Very nicely done 
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Thanksies! I changed it indeed - I hope it's now better readable? Hehe I see I made you interested in the conflict and the situation...be prepared for more 8D
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This page is wonderful.
Oh, and just a small suggestion and you definitely don't have to take it, but where the hyena in the middle on the first panel says "as good as possible," you could change that to "as much as possible" to make it flow just a little better. Then on the third panel, the black hyena says "We can't afford to take too much risks," you could change it to "we can't afford to take too many risks." Again, just a suggestion, but you did a really nice job. (:
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Thanks a lot for the suggestion!! I changed it already - I only didn't use the word 'afford' - it's a bit too polite for that hyena I think 
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I love this page and yes, the hyenas are easy to recognize thanks to their pelt color and different somatic traits (especially their manes). ^^
I like the lighter and the black one...While I don't like the other...
Overall you did a very good job
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Thanks! Good you recognize the hyenas - you get to know them better later on in the stories. As for their names - do you want to know them already? It's not really spoiler for the story anyway ^^
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