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Northern hyena's passing by in the large cheederian metacluster called Zilval Summits - and finding a young cheederian kitten....(no it's not Stian - because he would have bat/airplane-ears as kitten
)Apply the title of this volume 'Theory of Mind' ...Just think about why the characters possibly do what they do. There are 3 hyena to focus on, a brownish, nearly black yellow eyed one, a dark bluish grey one with mohawk and a blue eyed lighter spotted one with hanging mane.
Cheederians are enormous felids (lynx - oriental cat- tiger hybrids) - no NOT wolves!!!! And another thing I need to clarify: hyenas are no canids/dogs/wolves whatever either. They are are also feliform carnivores, being closely related to felidae and viverridae, so they are closer to cats (and thus cheederians) and civets than to dogs!
(I know I have to do the bubbles better - lot of noob/lazyness elements- still have to find a more readable font - improvement next chapter
)Art, Cheederian species, Northern hyena species, characters and story by me. Please don't copy and/or use it without my permission!
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Thanks! curious what you think of the whole comic.
The cats are actually called siderians, so they aren't really lions but some look like lions.
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Awe! oh no! 
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Awwwwwww!!!! That cub is SO cute! Nice work btw, your very talented
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Oh such lovely detail! That first panel with the cheedarian cub, those eyes are the very definition of stunning!
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Wonderful art. The colors and style add a magical feeling. I love how you draw their eyes and the northern hyenas
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Looks like me cat... Only white and not evil... T.T Great comic btw!!
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I get it heheh smart heyenas but the plan could back fire later in the cubs life!
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im not gonna spoil hehe
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So it is a wrong expression? Was not sure - I heard about brain drain. Here it means some kind of indoctrinating and ereasing all his past experiences. Do you have a better suggestion? My english sucks (and languages in general) - I'm looking for a nearly poetic but yet hard sentence that makes clear the fact that they hyenas will indoctrinate him and such
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The more common term is "brainwash".
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It sounds brilliant. I just didn't know what you meant originally.
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oh ok - I was also very confused with the language expressions but if it's more or less correct I keep it I think
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AWWW it`s a kitty!!!! lol no but it dose look a lot like stian though ... I LOVE HIM!!!
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Hehe wait until you see him as adult- he looks totally different from Stian XD
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its really cool that you made your own type of animal, it would be cool if later on in the future if there really were you now!
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woow the graphic novel is going really good so far ! 
I don't have to say anything about the artwork; its just awesome, the colors and detail..just... 
ah you really had a great build up already for the graphic novel; the first pages of back story and build up to actually starting with the story. some people would all skip the first prologue parts and would try to let as many things happen in one page, using to many panels and then it would just feel rushed. it would suck the alive feel out of it and it wouldn't make any sense. but you already avoided these things and you had a great build up and dynamic feel to it! well done!
this is going great to far, keep it up!
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Thanks!! That's good to hear!! I wanna be original, but not appear as a ubern000b - but yes I'm more or less n00b in making comics..but not at all with art. ANwyay I try to not stretch the panels to much and build it up. I hope it will go well in the following chapters too..b.ecause the story has soooo many details...it will be hard to find a way to cover some important details...
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youre welcome ! 
I'm not a pro at commics, so I can't really give that much advice but in the past I did a lot of them, so I kiiinda know what to avoid
ah yes to much is bad to XD oew yes that can be hard, but I bet you can do it
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Shouldn't that be Train his brain? Instead of Drain? Because drain means something like leegzuigen 
Apart from that, very striking drawing! The eyes of Yves are sooo cute! No good hearted fellow could kill the owner of those eyes!
Btw the 'time shall bring his fate' are really well chosen words. Kort maar krachtig, weinig woorden, veel diepe betekenis... aka de toekomst heeft nog wat in petto.
Sorry for the half English half Dutch, my brain is dead XD
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Takk!! I dunno - got no reactions on it from the english ones yet...but I found on internet that it is an expression that if you learn soo much that 'your brain is drained' and for some reason that expression sticked in my head...but yet I'm not sure if it is actually correct. At least the idea is taht they gonna indoctrinate him or at least indeed train him stronly biased towards their ideas. Haha hier komt een spoiler...een van de hoofdstukken heet: 'Time brings the fate' - K dnek da je wel doorheb waar k over snak. Ha k ga maar over op NLs anders vangen fans te veel op - nou moeten ze wel heel veel moeite doen om de hint te snappen haha.
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I think that I got the spoiler XD Echte slimme fans zetten dit wel in goochel vertaling, om maar even cryptisch te blijven XDD maar die titel is voor de oplettende lezer heel sterk denk ik. Nou weet ik niet hoeveel lezers ook daadwerkelijk nadenken over de titel, maar ik doe dat iig wel bij Robin Hobb..
Peter had de tekening ook gezien en hij zei ook dat brain drain niet gebruikelijk is in engelse teksten, en hij leest feitelijk alle leesboeken en comics etc in het engels. Maarja het kan wel, de betekenis is volgens mij wel duidelijk
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Amazing work on the fur as always, and I love the eyes of those Northern Hyenas! 
Haha, little Yves looks utterly adorable as a kitten - I love his frightened/nervous pose with his ears tilted back - it is Yves, isn't it? Just I can remember him being white and living near L'Etendard.
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Thanks! Yeah the hyenas have light eyes too - in contrast to regular spotted hyenas. Yeps you're right - it's him
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You're welcome, and I love that feature. <3
Haha, thought so - I must say, he's just too cute as a cub!
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Finally we can see a page with a dialogue x))
I love the colors and the atmosphere... well, as always)
And yeah, baby Yves is sooo cute :3
ps - I think this font is already readable)
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Yeps! The only page with dialogue in the introduction ^^ Tomorrow the last intro page I hope - then the story really starts - but I might take a little break between the intro and chapter 1. I'm rather busy
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Oh, it's a good news, I can't wait to begin reading the story itself))
Of course, I understand that you want to have a break and I hope that after it you'll have even more inspiration and ideas ;3
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I'm just so amazed by your skill ._. such detail!!!!
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Thanks - I might change style a bit in the following chapters...but the details remain XD
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I'm sure it will look amazing no matter what
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Oh I see now...hum this is where I have the 'ahHA!' moment and I keep my mouth shut!
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You make me curious now!!!! Luckily Yves is hardly never aggressive, and this submissive big-eyes-kitten-look has saved his life probably. But I actually love the hyenas too...so hard to choose a side...hehe but seriously you can't call this one an ugly brute: [link] ...
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