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And so we end this long, but necessary review process. I honestly wasn't sure of how feasible it would be to do this with the amount of work I already have...but that seems to be the case with me I'm really surprised with the way I was able to solve this page in particullar, since it was by far the most changed of the entire comic, losing half of what it was before, fortunately . To solve it, we have had to radically change certain aspects of the script, especially everything regarding Flaky knowing about a place called "Komodo Island" (which we will have the time to introduce and explore properly in the next chapter). New, shorter dialogues that actually help us move the story, rather than just complicating things further.
It's not perfect, considering the 24 pannel monster that was the original, but for being the best we could do, I think it's not too bad. It was very cruel to have left the story in such a cliffhanger...but I think we are finally ready to try it at least one last time. We are still not sure when we will start posting the new pages, but we will make sure to keep you informed.
Thank you so much for reading. We hope to have you with us very soon, for chapter 5
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Comments: 14
simosark [2020-04-17 11:17:06 +0000 UTC]
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SoftKeychains [2020-04-17 10:23:47 +0000 UTC]
Hey, I've been reading this remade comic since the begining of the chapters made by
I remember this comic from years ago, and even though I'm not a fan of Happy Tree Friends (their gore nature is just not my thing) but I like her art a lot enough to shake that off and read it anyway.
I like her design and art interpretation of the series and she was always been an inspiration for me. This remake has shown a lot of flow, storytelling and artistic improvement when back then I couldn't understand. Indeed there were too many panels each page so I can see how it must have been difficult to make the transition.
While my interest over this series is more inclined for the artist behind them than necessarily the story itself, I hope at least can show some loyalty in the next chapter.
Sorry this was probably not the kind of comment you wanted to read but just saying I really like the artistic line behind it.
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BrentdyeDragon [2020-04-17 06:51:03 +0000 UTC]
Flippy whereabouts was at the tiger hq from the jungle region who is hold captive.
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Fantasygerard2000 [2020-04-17 06:46:43 +0000 UTC]
Thiss was a great nostalgic trip.
Time for a new chapter i can't wait.
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