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fensterer — my shameful road
Published: 2010-09-28 22:14:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 3662; Favourites: 99; Downloads: 0
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Another random excercise. Might revisit it at a later date but for now it's done.No stocks, all photography and digital elements by me.
Edit: So now I am thinking of returning to this sooner rather than later. If you have suggestions onimproving this, please let me know what you think some adjustments could be.
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Looks like a demented oldschool Martian vehicle from the 50's 
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lol...yeah, I can see that. Thanks, Vince!
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Your beautiful work is featured here [link]
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i wish i had such an imagination and the right instruments to realise whats in my brain. this one really amazes me
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Thanks, glad you like it. Usually this stuff comes out due to lack of sleep!
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Reminds me of the story about a famous artist who sold a painting to a client and then would go to the client's house and tweak the painting. Eventually the client threw the painter out.
If it says what you want, stop and move on to the next project.
If you do not have a definite direction, maybe you should start over with another subject and try again? Not having a definite direction means that its thrash time and that may not be productive.
Have you thought about doing a series of pictures on the Shameful Road?
Sounds like a cool idea, maybe I could do some stuff for it.
This looks great.
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A series...interesting idea. glad you like it too!
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The way the face is developed seems great to me, and I can see some relationsip between this image and the film Christine
Anyway, I am not sure about the typographic work, the "ERER" at the right unbalances the composition, it needs a counter element, and the above typography... I think you should look for some font that suits better this composition
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Thanks Mario! I guess I'll be redoing this. I tried something with the fonts but apparently it's not the right way to go. 
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That was sort of the feel I was going for though I may change it.
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Great stuff, bud, seems like you're up for some changes in your style. Police tape, now this oldtimer from hell, looks realy interesting.
I'd love to see more trip atmosphere. Maybe some long lonesome road and more fuel power 
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Hmmm, looks like the general concensus is to do something with the font. Though I did think about adding more elmnts, may I'll remove the text and some things in it's place. Thanks, bud, I appreciate the crits.
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This one I like!! Great job. Maybe you can do some symmetry with the design. Other then that looks awesome.
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Thanks. I tried a little asymmetry here with type but maybe it's not working as good as I thought it did. I was going for a little more loose feel but with some structure to it. I think it's starting to btherme a bit now.
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that's "bother me a bit now"
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Another great job, very well done !
I like how you put elements together.
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wow man, i love the shade on the face. the wires are a nice touch to the overall head as well. i really dig this one!!!!
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Thank you so much! Glad you like it! It was a fun one to do!
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