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Ferelwing — Dulcet Desperado
Published: 2009-11-21 09:16:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 870; Favourites: 58; Downloads: 0
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Sorta came to me in the shower.. I'm glad I was able to write it down.. I was thinking about the space program and about science in general.. How we seem to take leaps and then get smacked back down by pettiness.Related content
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You're so welcome luv. Love and Big Hugs...Pam
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oh wow! I've only skimmed your poetry before, always struck by your art, but man....if I weren't an indebted college kid I would start a Ferelwing collection.
the alliteration is perfect, like what people have been saying, but there's this ethereal affect. Like we've been allowed a little glimpse into some deeper tragedy. Bravo!
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I really love the way the rhyme brings the words together.
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idk what dolcet means ... but i really like this
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dulcet [ˈdʌlsɪt]
adj
(of a sound) soothing or pleasant; sweet
[from Latin dulcis sweet]
dulcetly adv
dulcetness n
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ooooh ... makes sense. now i like it better.
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dulcet* ... still don't know what it means though. lol.
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I love the use of alliteration in the start if creates an energy that flows through out.
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