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PlainYellowFox — I Once Believed

Published: 2008-03-05 07:05:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 604; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Description I'm not sure what prompted this. Yet, some how I became very lonely and longing of my childhood tonight. I cried as I wrote the poem, cuz I'm a light hearted softy. I am truly proud of this piece, and believe it will be among my favorite for a very long time.

The grandest era of my childhood was spent in Kansas. The summers there were DIVINE. Never too hot. NEVER too cold We lived in a couldasack (I have no idea how to spell that) and there were virtually no fences in any one's yard. So, it was like running through a huge park. There was also a lot of space in between the houses. Our house sat on a hill, and at the base of the hill was a bumble bees nest, under a large slab of rock. Bleeding hearts grew around this stone, and no where else. There were also a lot of rabbits and fireflies.

ANYWHO, that's me as a child at the front of the parade, wearing some sort of cloak and hood. We always dressed up, and went on grand adventures. The other two are two of my three brothers. At the time, the third was an infant,

~A Plain Yellow Fox
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Mistshadow2k4 [2009-06-16 07:08:54 +0000 UTC]

Amazingly beautiful! I found myself thinking of a long-lost fairy narrating the poem, as if one was looking back at the world they left long ago.

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PlainYellowFox In reply to Mistshadow2k4 [2009-06-16 13:55:56 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much it is meant to represent the childhood I shared with my brothers

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Mistshadow2k4 In reply to PlainYellowFox [2009-06-16 15:43:36 +0000 UTC]

You're quite welcome

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taroviandeviant [2009-04-02 19:26:05 +0000 UTC]

that was beautiful... Though I still think I prefer my hometown (probably because... well it's my hometown)

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KeechakVarg [2008-03-06 01:29:36 +0000 UTC]

difinatly your best work ever.

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InkSpirit [2008-03-05 20:50:08 +0000 UTC]

You are really good at writing poems! And it was encorporated lovely into the picture

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celiex3 [2008-03-05 14:28:30 +0000 UTC]

wow, great poem

its like ur reading it and all of a sudden you really get into it and it twists ur emotion from time to time.

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SuperNinjaWolf [2008-03-05 12:10:30 +0000 UTC]

This is an awesome piece! Fantastic job

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Kins-Wolf [2008-03-05 08:42:08 +0000 UTC]

Very invokative! Great Poem and a good picture to go with it! I seem to have written allot of sad poetry awhile ago and I'm gona post them soon. I hate that their all depressing in some way but those are the only ones I could think of.

You did a great piece that has inspired me deeply !

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FlyingPenguin67 [2008-03-05 08:23:39 +0000 UTC]

wow thats powerful. it makes me want to go back to my childhood and find a field to run in as these children here. with my good friends (you would be there) and Lauren.

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