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Feyrnand β ULSW2 OC Rework practice
Published: 2019-01-27 16:11:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 1851; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 31
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Reshade of my OC Feyr,sheet WIP.Β credits to Angryboy,Luka, MJ SSW2, Extreme Butoden, for the restrained SSJ Broly sheet, Que/Qsab101.
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Stop shaming yourself...quit stalking me, I already got 3 deviations taken down from your Deviantart because you're just a nasty ripper who gives poor credits and thinks he can throw a tantrum when called out to justify himself.Β
Also, learn how to read.
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Some guy called Allenyael, he is basically stalking/harrassing me saying things like ''you're a ripper because you do ULSW/LSW and you didn't invent it'' to justify the fact that he thinks I'm wrong for reporting his ass over the artwork he steals and reposts on his account without giving credits.
An idiot, basically.
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I think you're taking steps in the right direction, but I've got to agree with Zbir Sonimul here. I'll message you and we can work on it.
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I'm surprised you still remember by Vortex nickname
I feel flattered ;*
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ofc I do. Come back and love me pls.
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What are you talking about? I've always loved you ;*
BTW How come come back? I thought Vortex forum was shut down shortly after Shinbs' death?
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We have a discord community that's still active if you use discord!
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I've never used it, tbh. Thanks for the link
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The aura and the pose are really good, I feel like the pallete needs a little bit more saturation on the shadows.
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I'm sorry, but you went from 9/10 to 4/10. Colour pallete, shading, hairstyle and body sctructure changes are all for worse.
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For now Im just experimenting with it, any suggestions?
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I'm not sure whether using 2 tones shading is doing any good in this situation, but as long as you're experimenting I guess it's fine for now. He looks too childish in my opinion - his round face doesn't match his inflated/buffed physique. I also find his shoulder to be too long comparing it to the length of his bicep or just overally the arm. His palm looks kind of unrefined as well. I find the bottom part of the sprite really nice.Β
Mayby some of the stuff I wrote above is just a matter of personal taste tho. What I mean is a little bit more like this:
ibb.co/JypKD78
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Personal taste is what the case seems to be like, Im not a spriting genius tbh but it looks perfectly fine to me either way. All I ever did to it was move the eyes a pixel to the left because it looked retarded without the previous head design, it is intentionally chibi looking, however I kinda like the change on the body shading, Ill tweak it a similar way or basically keep yours if you dont mind, but I definetely wont change the head at all for now. I wish we had more direct ways to talk, I feel like I can learn a lot from your opinion, thank you for your time
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