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Great page! Two "f"s in the word "different" in the third panel are capitalized, and when the mouse chick talks about the pig, it should be "Is it that damn pig?" But overall, love it!
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Thanks for the comment. But the two "ff"s are not capitalized. It's just that fond.
But I'll think about what you say. Thanks for the comment.
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Anytime! Sorry to bother.
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Fiona,
I have done about sixty pages of lettering on my graphic novel and I notice that you are making many of the mistakes I am making: crowded word balloons with no white space in them, "tangents" meaning a word balloon that touches a border, crossed balloon tails and personal "I" with missing serifs.
There is a nice two-page tutorial of what to watch out for.
[link]
I like Adobe Illustrator for lettering because it has some nice tools for shaping the balloons and I can spread the sound effects over two layers to put an outline or two around the WORD that has more impact.
Elwood Edward Howes
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