nycterent [2011-04-10 16:54:52 +0000 UTC]
I'd be inclined to center the chair more. Or less. Right now, it's only slightly off-center -- enough that it looks like a mistake, and not enough for it to be artistically deliberate. There also appears to be something dark and small by the mask, but the contrast makes it a mere shape. Is it significant? If so, perhaps it should be more in focus? If not, I'd remove it entirely, because it draws my attention away from the overall image with the question, 'What is that?'
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