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Published: 2015-10-06 14:26:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 491; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 2
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#inktober day 6Hmmm got no inspiration, so i just play with paper~~
Change those paper works into paper plane!
I should continue my OCs project, but can't find the right pose & concept. So i just draw this instead XD
Please let me know what you think about this one~
A5 + pen
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Yea your art is amazing no problem.your welcome XD
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Hi! I'm coming from ProjectComment 's comment tag, my tag being "pointy", and there's a lot of pointy things here, from the scythe to the paper planes, sooo...
I think I already commented on your previous work with the same character with the scythe and paper, and I have to say I like both! I can find here the same dynamism and strength of the paperworks, but I like that we get to see a close-up of her now! ^^
What I like the most is the curve created by the planes, the jacket, the scythe and the pillars/hands on the background. It's what created the dynamism, but it's also well contrasted with dark and light zones. The transition from normal paper leaves to paper planes is also very smooth and great to look at. I like her pose, it works as an evocation pose in my opinion, and her hair is very nice and flowing.
The only thing that bothers me is her jawline, I think it's not so well placed and it makes her face look a bit wrong. Or maybe it's her nose and mouth that took a strange angle? I'd suggest you to construct the face anatomy before inking, even if it's a sketch. I've found this tutorial here, I hope it's useful:Β fav.me/d4bvln8
Next person in the tagline is darknightwolf2010 and the tag is "companion"!
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Hello! Thank you for your kind words, Β dear! Glad you like it ^^
Thanks for the tutorial! Really useful ^^
Sorry for the late reply~ I'll continue the mission XD
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Cool
I think you can push the foreshortening and perspective a bit more. And some of the larger paper planes in the foreground can be more dynamic. Right now, they just blend right into the papers behind them.
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Thank you very much! Thanks for your suggestion ^^
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Wow, the amount of details you put into this is amazing! How long did it take for you to draw this? :3 And paper planes are awesome!
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Thank you~! It's around 3 hours ^^
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It's really amazing
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I shall introduce you to my army of paper planes. Hahaha.
The shading on the outfit looks great! Though drowning in a wave of paper doesn't sound ideal.
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Ahaha Paper planes~
Thank yoouuu~!
Hhe i haven't find a better scene for her ^^
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You're welcome.Β
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