Comments: 24
Jack-13 [2017-06-04 14:49:44 +0000 UTC]
I love the emotion you managed to capture with this piece. The rain and muted color palette adds so much to the atmosphere and lack of detail in the background really makes the main character stand out but you can still understand what the location is. The fact that the only bright color in the piece is the purple in the eyes of the character really pulls the viewer in and highlights the fact that she is crying. The detail in the hair and the tears is amazing and give a very organic feel to the character, she definitely feels like she is alive and I can almost hear her sniffling as she tries to keep from sobbing out loud.
There are a couple of distracting elements in the painting, but neither really are horrible. First is the white outline that's only on the left side of the character, I'm not really sure what that is but it draws my eye away from the character. The second is the gray discoloration that seems to run through the background. I'm guessing that this is the shadow from the bus stop overhang, drawn in in Sai or Photoshop darken the tint and then the edge was moved around the character to add the shading on her. The shading really should just be on the foreground, not the background, it's really strange to see the trees changed hue in the middle of the background. These may seem like a nitpicks but constructive criticism needs to show areas to improve or it's not all that helpful.
Overall, I love this piece. There is a story behind this, and I want to know more about this character. What happened to upset her? Where is she running away to? Is she going to be okay? This is just a great example of excellent visual storytelling. Fantastic work.
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FirriApril In reply to Jack-13 [2017-06-10 18:06:59 +0000 UTC]
Thank you a lot! I especially appreciate the great constructive criticism you gave! I rarely get that and I am happy to receive it <3
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AutumnTomBoy [2017-02-01 16:27:12 +0000 UTC]
Can you draw my OC...? If not I get it but these days I can never get a good wolf drawer ;-;
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AnimalJamRocks12345 In reply to AutumnTomBoy [2017-02-22 15:38:27 +0000 UTC]
Most people do commissions. I'm pretty sure their commissions are closed.
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oldfossil59 [2016-12-19 19:52:38 +0000 UTC]
For a speedpaint this is an incredible piece of work!
Amazing choice of colours and a character you can really feel for.
The background throws the character forward perfectly.
10/10
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RagingPhXp [2016-10-11 22:47:29 +0000 UTC]
your style of making: characters, expressions and details. browsing your art is pure enjoyment!
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HaloExodus [2016-09-23 11:19:49 +0000 UTC]
I love this rain....
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Plejman [2016-09-17 16:51:35 +0000 UTC]
Jesus Christ! This...her expression rly makes me feel for her. In terms of quality it is great! I love this puprle'sh color palete!
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ARCR-CRic [2016-09-07 21:19:49 +0000 UTC]
Great job, I really liked your color choice, it fits well for the theme, also the fading background added a lot for the atmosphere. Congratulations!
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MoonPawWC [2016-08-23 15:17:21 +0000 UTC]
How. U draw
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DustTheWolf [2016-08-20 19:33:53 +0000 UTC]
Beautifully sad, I just love it :3
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LalaNorisu [2016-08-20 18:46:42 +0000 UTC]
Look beutiful and ilove the style
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CraneCaress [2016-08-20 10:16:38 +0000 UTC]
Aah, it is soo beautiful!! Colours and rain are awesome! Excellent work on it))
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NamelessCoyote [2016-08-20 09:40:08 +0000 UTC]
This looks so good! Great job on this!
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