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first-sight — Bleached
Published: 2005-10-06 06:41:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 75; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description Hold my hand out
looking for a hand to reach
there’s no-one around
No1 to beseech

I’m all alone
All on my own
No-one here
Nothing is shown

I’m looking for the answers
For all the questions I don’t know
I’m looking for the questions
For the answers I don’t know

I’ve been searching for that someone
Looking all around
I been searching for that someone
Who now I think I’ve found

I was looking round for someone to hold
Looking but it was getting cold

Lost in the thoughts that filled my mind
Lost in the dreams that filled the night
Lost in the stars that fills the sky

I was floating away
Going nowhere
Now I’m found
Back on the ground

Feeling things I thought I wouldn’t
Doing things I thought I couldn’t
Saying things I’m told I shouldn’t

Going places
Rambling on
Now there’s only two feet
That I stand on

Wearing my life around my neck
Wearing it for all its worth
Like a baby after birth
It cud go one way
Or the other
Sometimes depends on the dad n mother

Found the path
Just keep walking
Let the rest
Just do the talking

I’ve seen it happen
Once you’ve been reached
You all act like your f*ckin bleached
All just the same
No-ones different

Doing things to impress
Relieve all your stress
You’re all just a mess
But I don’t think of you as less

You look at me as if I’m shitty
Pretending you have a shred of pity

You gota move on
Go somewhere new
Stop lying to yourself
And just be You

Don’t be like them
Don’t get there teaching
You’ll end up like a robot
Just f*ckin bleached

Your brains sucked by the leach
You all end up so out of reach
Feeling sorry
Full of worry
Look at them
Going strong
Look at them
Through right and wrong
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Comments: 6

burtongirlbr [2005-10-06 11:20:20 +0000 UTC]

heyyy
i loved it men!
that's really good
great work.
i have a poetry on my gallery too
=]

congrats

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first-sight In reply to burtongirlbr [2005-10-06 15:24:11 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou im never quite sure where my poetry is going until i start writing and then i might end up somewhere completely different to where i started its kind of weird because sometimes it ends up being too much. Thanks for the comment I'm glad you like it !

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burtongirlbr In reply to first-sight [2005-10-06 19:31:07 +0000 UTC]

thats cool. i tip: u can split the poem in two like: me, the begining and me, the end. got it?
or maybe u can study some style so that u wont pass the rythim....


anyway u're very good for a beginner!

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first-sight In reply to burtongirlbr [2005-10-06 20:09:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks i'll keep trying with the poems im doing a lot of photo stuff at the moment but i'll keep going with the poems too

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burtongirlbr In reply to first-sight [2005-10-06 20:37:16 +0000 UTC]

cool i'll be checking ur gallery

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first-sight In reply to burtongirlbr [2005-10-07 13:32:57 +0000 UTC]

cool

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