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teasidesketches [2010-10-29 00:50:08 +0000 UTC]

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Critique time! BECAUSE I CAN. n.n

Let's start with the good, shall we?
Your coloring is getting better~! And, you did a good job with the pose; after all that work, it paid off! I love how she and the Munchlax practically have the same expression, alongside their poses. The face looks right and generally balanced, so I can't say much about that other than a "thumbs up". :] Same with the hair.

Now for the real meat of this critique, because that's why we all want them. >u>

The Pose: Though you did a a good job, the part that bothers me is her hand (the one holding munchlax). You're probably aware, but the fingers aren't thick enough, so it looks a bit like paper, or something else thin.
On the other hand, holding the key chain,the pinky is a little too stretched out from the rest of the fingers. The middle finger should also be slightly longer than the rest of them, even at that angle. Her thumb looks a tad bit awkward as well because of the obvious and very dark fold, giving it the appearance of being forced against her palm.

In the Shading: The light source is a bit mismatched from her head down to her main body. I'm sure your intention was to show the bulk of her hair at the parting, but that also makes it appear the light source is coming from the right. The shading might also be a tiny bit darker behind Munchlax, but can be excused as the light source isn't too strong. Inside his mouth it should also be shaded a little more, as no light gets in there. You could give some appearance to that by darkening the lines where the shadow should be, too. The shading in the right (our left) hand should also be a little weaker towards the palm. In that pose, her hand would be too flat for her fingers to cover the palm.

The coloring itself: the streaks are a little bit obvious (or at least, to me). Maybe coloring a little faster could help? Some of the shadows don't completely blend into the base color.

I'm no expert, but just giving my two cents. ;D

Good picture~! She's so cute <3

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Shomura [2010-11-01 02:02:46 +0000 UTC]

it's cute...
munchlax... -o-

I'm hungry... lol o.O;

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anakareninart [2010-10-30 00:05:39 +0000 UTC]

Wowww!!!! that's tooo cutee!!!! I love itt!!!!! you're awesome with copic markers!!

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Mindlesskidx [2010-10-29 05:48:52 +0000 UTC]

Heheheheh... the scarf....

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ShayminsGracidea01 [2010-10-29 01:38:28 +0000 UTC]

D'awww, this is so cute~! I think the face is shorter, but it's still in your style, so great job!

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Crazed-In-Theory [2010-10-29 00:30:25 +0000 UTC]

Aww! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! The snorlax is adorable as I expected, the hair is gorgeous, and yes, you did keep the face short (but not too shojo!).

You remembered the ring! It's perfect! EVERYTHING IS PERFECT! I especially like how you snuk in the snorlax!

Thanks so much!

Love,
Nikki!

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