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FlatlineOnSteroids — Drowning
Published: 2008-09-29 01:30:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 399; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 3
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Description She tells it all when she’s drunk,
Truth coming out with tears,
Showing how low she’s sunk,
Drowning in wasted years,

Wishing on stars long since fallen,
Slipping on her old lies,
She regrets ignoring her calling,
Seeing through unfocused eyes,

She could have been a model,
She should have went to college,
It doesn’t take a therapist to tell,
She’s been thrown off the edge,

Stuck in this town with her time,
Living for the end of the day,
She searches the bottom of her glass,
For some relief from the pain,

Its not living, just existing,
A cage without a door,
And if someone were to listen,
They’d see she can’t take anymore.
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Comments: 11

5-of-4 [2008-10-20 17:56:17 +0000 UTC]

an incredable poem

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FlatlineOnSteroids In reply to 5-of-4 [2008-10-22 20:39:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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5-of-4 In reply to FlatlineOnSteroids [2008-10-23 01:46:27 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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SlowlyDisintegrating [2008-10-14 01:29:54 +0000 UTC]

I like the begining the best. Its very well done.

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FlatlineOnSteroids In reply to SlowlyDisintegrating [2008-10-14 03:03:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much :]

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SlowlyDisintegrating In reply to FlatlineOnSteroids [2008-10-15 01:38:53 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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PAPAWINDY [2008-10-01 19:09:33 +0000 UTC]

tha would be pretty ace as a song

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FlatlineOnSteroids In reply to PAPAWINDY [2008-10-02 12:50:17 +0000 UTC]

Yeah? I'm glad you think so, unfortunately I cannot sing.

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pearwood [2008-09-29 02:16:14 +0000 UTC]

You write well, Erica. This needs some tightening up, but it would be worth the effort.
Steve

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FlatlineOnSteroids In reply to pearwood [2008-09-29 02:17:09 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, any suggestions?

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Dino-snax [2008-09-29 02:12:18 +0000 UTC]

I adore you and your style(s) of writing. You are always able to spark one emotion or another no matter what you're writing. You have this nack for striking cords in people then pulling on thier heart strings.

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