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Published: 2013-09-27 03:00:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 1939; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 1
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Someone mentioned in a review about Dugal's french fry wish. This was inspired by that.Thistle learns the major disadvantage of working with Dugal: having to deal with lots of fast food. Also it turns out he can draw other people with close to 100 percent accuracy. He should've been an artist XD
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Dugal wish was that?! 
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Haha well that's just a joke wish that Thistle drew up to get back at him lol. Also long time no see, glad to see you're alive!
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XD That is really funny!
Yeah I'm glad as well, sorry for being out College was a bit of a challenge and now I'm in my 2nd year of uni I can't believe all the time went, I'm still interested in reading 'When I Return' but so many things have bumped up unexpectedly. Sorry about that I am still interested in your stories and art. How are things?
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FFFFFFFFFFFFF sorry I haven't been visiting dA a lot lately and this is what happens when I do that >_>
Where does time go, huh? It sure flies by fast. I've been playing a lot of Monster Hunter recently and snowboarding and Pokemanzing and it's been sucking up a lot of whatever little time I have left.... it's been good though. Busy, but good
How's university life treating you?
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No problem I get that whenever I am stuck at the house with nothing to do until it becomes a race just getting things done. I'm sure I was capped at 40% for being late with a subject though. But hopefully it'll go well and unfortunately I'm stuck at either home or babysitting since we have a break for two weeks. I shouldn't be complaining because it was a stressful time with assessment week but I like going to uni. I even stopped playing games for some time now O.O. However just finished a game recently which was a spin off sequel to an RPG game free online once downloaded called OFF. It's once twisting game and full of puzzles to, but the ending was worth it compared to the original. That I did not see coming.
How is life going with you?
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Hmmm, I heard something about OFF. I didn't realize it was free! Maybe I should check it out. Or not, since my professors are going to murder me if I don't get my work done lol. I LOVE unexpected endings though, so I'm really tempted to play now....
I have a big project coming up... actually more than one big project, but I don't think that's anything new since I always seem to be on a deadline for something heh. I've been gradually writing chapters for fanfic bit by bit, but it's definitely not at the speed that it used to be at. Hmmm, I don't think my life is all that interesting aside from that. I watched the Hobbit in imax for the first time, I guess. They didn't have enough Smaug
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It is a really good game this link has the sequel and there are two endings depending one what you do rpgmaker.net/games/6361/
There are some free RPG Games around like Misao, The Witches house, Ib (really good game) most of the RPG I've seen being played are horror based and freak me out, like Ao Oni for example -_-'
I hope you do well with the project as well. What's the project about?
I look forward to reading your stories soon, Really I am it just seems things always come up for which I apologise for.
I don't know why but I've stopped posting and updating some stories, mostly since hardly anyone even comments or leaves anything about how the story can be improved, I don't know.
As for the Hobbit, you mean the 3rd one right? The 3rd one in my opinion wasn't too bad but the ending with Bilbo seemed rather rushed and I ended up not liking the end at all. The beginning of the 3rd also seemed rushed as well and I'm pretty sure that there wasn't a battle of armies in the book, maybe I may have forgotten that part since I had the book read to me when I was younger.
What do you think?
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Oh crap I should have seen that comment before I went and started playing Dragon Age. I guess AFTER Dragon age then
The project is something I would rather not be visible to public eyes, unfortunately. To put vaguely, it's a funded research project
Hmmm, I'm not really sure what the commenting trends are for ff.net really. I've tried to figure it out myself over the years, but I feel like great stories that should be getting comments are often neglected for whatever reason, and I don't really know what it is that I'm doing that got attention (I figured it was due to initial updating speed + deviantart activity, but I don't know...). I'm thinking of setting aside fanfic writing for a bit after I finish FaV (or idk, unless I decide to work on the 'sucked into Hyrule' idea or something), and if I do that I might have more time and patience to read and comment on some stories up there.
Yeahhhh I liked the beginning with Smaug and then it kind of turned into some plotless hack and slash. If it wasn't in 3D I don't think I would have enjoyed it because at least with the 3D glasses I could enjoy it like a thrill ride. Yeah idk if there really was a plot in that movie for most of the time :s
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OOooh! So how are you going to start it?
Yeah I mean what was the point of that after the defeat of Smaug? It wasn't in the book and yet they added something like that. Were they thinking of tying up loose ends then they should of thought it through in some way.
In a way it was for me 4-5/ out of 10 for effort. I wasn't even watching 3D and it still slightly confused me. O.o
So how are you?
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You mean... how am I going to start my project or the game or... ? (sorry I'm a bit confused!)
Ah pff I hate it when they add new things that weren't in books (they usually mess it up when they do that: I haven't really seen a movie that pulled it off well).
I'm doing better! Been playing a lot (too much) dragon age at the moment haha
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Sorry I meant both ^-^'
Here here! It's like they're ruining the spirit and meaning of the actual book. If they are not going to take it seriously then why bother making films based on books in the first place?
Surprisingly I have stopped playing, mostly due to uni work but I have been doing a story (Shame I had to pause it for work as well ^-^') But I nearly finished it as well, just one more chapter before I start its sequel
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hmm, well for DA
there's something about being a minority in a minority that's really appealing to me about elf-mages.
As for the project, well since the last time I replied to now, it has multiplied... which is good because that means our lab is productive but bad because it's... more work haha. It's involved asking a LOT of people for help at the risk of being annoying
A story! That's exciting 
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But you enjoy being Elf-mage and then being Rogue?
They sound interesting, what about Elf-mages interest you?
On the bright side it's good and keeps you busy right?
Fanfic
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I just wanted to try out different classes so I won't be bored by the gameplay
Well elves in DA are the subjugated race, and mages are also disliked. That makes elf mages the bottom of the bottom rung in terms of social hierarchy, and I love that because in DA your character becomes the leader of your group.
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How did that go? Did you enjoy the games?
Oh that is cool!
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I was reaaally into it for a bit and now for some reason I just can't bring myself to finish it? It's gotten boring now and I can't figure out why :s
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Maybe you lost your spark?
It's like a writers block only you are put off completely. Has it got a part of it that's repetitive?
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Not really, so i'm not really sure
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Has something recently caught your interest?
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Aww, he wanted to be the burger king...how cute *huggles Dugal and stuffs a burger in his mouth* :3 *does the same to Vaati*
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Vaati: *glares at Dugal*
Dugal: *glares at Thistle*
Thistle: I told you I'm sick of fast food...
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Oh god! This is the best alternate ending EVER! X'D
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I should've let Thistle write the story instead lol
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Ikr! The story would have so many crazy moments from his imagination! XD
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I almost died laughing when I saw the "I AM THE BURGER KING!!!!" XD I think that it's pretty accurate.
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hahaha yeah Thistle got it down right
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XD Awesome! ...
*tries to steal the hat* *gun shot*
Meep! *runs and hides behind Fleets* Dugal, you wouldn't shoot little 'ol Fleets now would you?
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*whispers* I think he might not mind shooting in non-mortal areas >_>
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XD
*nods* can't we just throw him in a closet? *gets shot* Meep! Don't shoot! I'll throw a Thistle at you!
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i started laughing so hard i can't stop i've been laughing for like 20 minutes now
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This should have been the real ending XD
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Ha... haha... kehaha...
*ahem*
Uhh... I mean... hehe- STOP LAUGHING AT DUGAL DAMNIT.
Regardless, this is hilarious, even if the last chapter didn't do the story justice (no offense, of course. It was still good, I was just expecting something... else...)
And wow, those shades are tacky...
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Aw, okay. I had a few endings in mind and the one I ultimately picked was the one I thought would satisfy the greatest number of readers + me. What kind of ending would you have wanted?
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That's just it. I'm honestly not sure.
I guess I was expecting Vaati to have miraculously retained even the slightest bit of magic and build it back up from there... Honestly not sure.
Oh well, you chose the ending, and it is your story, after all. I did like Cat!Bates though, a nice touch.
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