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spacewolfomega [2013-01-12 23:45:32 +0000 UTC]
Nice to see some more art from you and the writing was well done, too!
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CorvusCaelum [2013-01-11 20:01:20 +0000 UTC]
Always finding the best of friends, aren't we Amira?
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tbolt [2013-01-10 10:54:52 +0000 UTC]
Great work here, glad to see something from you after a short break! =^^=
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tbolt In reply to flippedoutkyrii [2013-01-21 11:44:16 +0000 UTC]
Ok, I finally got around to reading the story, good work, a couple tangled sentences grammatically in the middle, nothing a little proofreading wouldn't fix.
But I an a little confused, Was Nitrania in pink or blue? Or did I miss something, because it seemed like her colors changed after she re-powered herself back up...
Outside of that, great job describing all the action! =^^=
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flippedoutkyrii In reply to tbolt [2013-01-21 16:51:23 +0000 UTC]
Nah, she was the same color throughout (I also threw that story together in half-an-hour ^^)
Yeah, considering how fast I wrote it, I thought I did a good job :>
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D3kaB1u3 [2013-01-09 06:16:50 +0000 UTC]
I don`t have the words that express how awesome you made Nitrania look with battle damages, and you got an eye for the details looking by the ammount of punishment she recieved, as for the story you made justice to Nitrania`s personality!
If I have some time I would like to line this up and color it!
Can I?
On the meantime goes to my faves!
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