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fluffylovey — SwiftehxLydz gift art

Published: 2010-03-08 21:37:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 990; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 20
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Description :3 naaw, how cute eh? ^^

Took about 2 1/2 hours, NEED ADVICE PLEASE IT LOOKS CRAPPEH :CCC

Hope you two like eet



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Comments: 22

Magicmare [2010-05-27 18:45:02 +0000 UTC]

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First off Izzy let me say:
The colouring and shading are perfect. The realist style is very nicely done and how you smudged the markings makes it look like real fur.
The spikes on Swifteh's collar are nicley done to, nice 3-D effect
I so like how you done hair as markings (i believe) its very well done

Little tip for Lydz's colours: if you feel their abit dark for ur lineart try lighting them a touch and shading for her should be around 20 to 40 visible or that what I use for her, but whatever works with you is fine
BG is simple but overall nice

First Crit so yeah, getting used to it x3
Still love the pic Izzy :3 Dankies again

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tribble-of-doom [2010-03-08 21:59:13 +0000 UTC]

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Firstly letus go through some negative things;

THe lineart could use some work. It's made up of a lot of very skinny, very harsh lines. The way you do fur detail makes it just look sharp instead of smooth like fur should be. I'd suggest only making it "furry" on select places (the top of the head should usually be flat unless it's a long hair, or the cat is wet, or there is a glare of light catching the fur on top. Rest of the time you can't see the fur there). You do need to refine your muzzle shape, make it less narrow, more cat line (references are your friend), the highlight shading makes Lydz just look a little *too* shiny, and takes away from the picture. I'd try dimming that white down a abit.

Positiviesssss;

Your overall shading is good. the fur detail that isn't lineart also looks good, the angle on the spikes is very niceleh doooone, the markings have a very nice flow (I know you didn't design them, but you did a nice job re-creating them/drawing zem) dum dee dum I don't think I have anythign else to say. :3

Nice job!

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T-MAN16z In reply to tribble-of-doom [2010-03-08 22:17:35 +0000 UTC]

TEACH ME TO BE MEAN LIKE THIS D:

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flamingflamingo123 [2010-06-23 15:35:28 +0000 UTC]

OMG!!!!! my name is izzy too!!! ^O^

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fluffylovey In reply to flamingflamingo123 [2010-06-23 21:18:38 +0000 UTC]

DDDDD

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flamingflamingo123 In reply to fluffylovey [2010-06-23 21:20:36 +0000 UTC]

DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD









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LoxiXJohn4eva [2010-03-09 20:59:26 +0000 UTC]

OMFG IZZY DIS IS TOO CUTE

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fluffylovey In reply to LoxiXJohn4eva [2010-03-09 21:09:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank yous loxi ^^ *huggles*

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LoxiXJohn4eva In reply to fluffylovey [2010-03-10 11:33:21 +0000 UTC]

np ^^ -hugs back-

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Magicmare [2010-03-09 16:18:54 +0000 UTC]

OMFG IZZY
THIS
IS
AMAZING

8'''D I love u 4 doing this...

I FRICKING LOVE IT!! YOU MADE MY DAY *cries tears of joy*

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fluffylovey In reply to Magicmare [2010-03-09 18:05:45 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome lydz ^^ XD your first fanart eh?!?!?!

Naw, I wubs you too :'D

Don't cry dang it XDXD <--- do not want tears XD

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Magicmare In reply to fluffylovey [2010-03-09 18:16:23 +0000 UTC]

INDEED FIRST FANART X3

X3

Okay I LOL with joy :3

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mistymay0 [2010-03-09 01:50:37 +0000 UTC]

Nice Iz. x3

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fluffylovey In reply to mistymay0 [2010-03-09 14:37:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank yous ^^

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frostheart29 [2010-03-08 22:14:13 +0000 UTC]

Pretty! Though, may I suggest, when you do the cat noses, to not use total black and maybe a dark pink?

Anyway, !

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fluffylovey In reply to frostheart29 [2010-03-08 22:37:04 +0000 UTC]

hmmn.. good idea ^^ thank yous :3

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frostheart29 In reply to fluffylovey [2010-03-08 22:49:18 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

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tribble-of-doom [2010-03-08 21:54:36 +0000 UTC]

o3o they're lesbians now?

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mistymay0 In reply to tribble-of-doom [2010-03-09 01:50:26 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it beh a joke, and i beh the daughter 8D

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fluffylovey In reply to tribble-of-doom [2010-03-08 21:55:19 +0000 UTC]

I think it's a joke tbh, but I have a fix with drawing couple art 8DDD

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Took-Southpaw [2010-03-08 21:41:07 +0000 UTC]

Awww this is adorable Fluffeh I love the shading and the way you did the fur! The markings look so cool with the fur the way you did it ^-^

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fluffylovey In reply to Took-Southpaw [2010-03-08 21:51:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you char chaaaar !! *huggles* He he, fur took ages man XD I love their sonas, the markings are epic winners ^^

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