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Published: 2009-05-06 18:43:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 890; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Kiwi took a break from studying for finals and colored this for practice @__@ (I suck at coloring, lol)The lineart is by the amazing and the horrid coloring is by me
eheheh...Just trying to mess around with SAI and hopefully get better with coloring
LOLI was going to fix the hair... but don't have time.... hmmm, maybe later
Cya all later 
(Srry for the lazy bg)Critique coloring maybe?
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Like I said, I think it looks nice and i love the color choice for shading. What I think could help is a more defined light source, and then highlights on the hair to match. There really isn't one on the hair right now, especially since the light source seems to be coming up from straight on the front.
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thank you so much Lan
now I know why the hair looks funny
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I forgot to mention how much I like the eyes. There's nice detail in there without going overboard (as a lot of anime artists do.. out tons of detail in the ey but no where else!).
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thank you so much ^^
eyes are my favorite thing to color and... me thinks I actually spend more time on the eyes than the rest of the picture sometimes
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thank you ^^
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This looks very nice ^^
Shiny eyes are shiny 8D
I also like how you can see the brushstrokes, the white part of her dress looks especially nice!
As for critique, I little more definition in the shading of her face wouldn't hurt.
Maybe some blush or highlighting on her cheeks?
Other than that... **thumbs up**
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thank you so much ^^
hmm, blush, thanks
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Kiwi, I don't know WHAT you're talking about when it comes to the hair. >:C I really love your style of coloring hair; each strand seems to have an inner glow.
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hair is still one of the things I have the most trouble coloring tho
hence, I raid DA for tutorials
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Hey! Your color has come a long way!
I don't have the money to "officially" write a critique lol but since it is requested...
You have an amazing sense of texture... the flowers, fabric on her dress and hair are very well done. The shoulder area could use a bit of lightening up.
Her skintone on her face is very well planned out, her hands have a few very deep shadows in her fingers, I think they might be able to be lightened up a bit...
The only other thing I would alter a bit is the background... you have all this amazing detail in the character and have a good pos/neg relationship with the background but it's still fairly flat... nothing a little painted blur can't fix?
An overall AWESOME collaboration of talents, I hope this was a help! 
good luck with finals!
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o wow! thank you for such an awesome critique
I really appreciate that you wrote all of this out
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np, I'm glad it was a help, it was really refreshing to have someone request a real critique
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really? I didn't know you couldn't officially critique if you didn't have a sub @_@
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yeah it's kinda bizarre, but I do admit it's a good marketing tool lol
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Tell you what, I really like the way that you colored her eyes
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Dawwww<333
Don't say you suck m'dear,you've did an awsome job.
I especially like the way you've colored the roses in yellow!
Thank you very much for coloring it!
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awww
thank you so much
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You kidding? The coloring is pretty cool! I wish I could write a critique, but I'm not worthy enought to be criticizing works yet
Very well done
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and you are worthy ^^ your art is awesome
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Oh, well thank you too
And you are very welcome
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I'll crit this when i get back the computer
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I really appreciate it
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the coloration is amazing >________<
well done^^
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Don't say you suck for color ;__;
I would be really glad if you colored one of my drawings, but my artline is very messy for this T__T
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aww
I'd love to do a collab with you sometime tho
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This would be great
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The colouring is so velvety, I love it! Fits so well with the dress.
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thank you
glad you like it ^^
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ooo so pretty i wish i could colout awesome like you master
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lol, kiwi is no master 
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