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FollowingStars — Love and hate by-nc-nd

Published: 2012-03-17 20:28:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 636; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 3
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Description You live inside my head each day,
Wafting like smoke within.
I can't catch you, make you stop this,
Your heart won't stop tugging.

I try to put my mind at ease,
This is not my choice.
Yet I cannot stop hearing you,
All there is is your voice.

Your eyes, your lips, your perfect face,
But you're not who I want.
I don't love you, I never did,
But you still won't stop this haunt.

Get out of my head, I tell you,
Leave, you don't have my heart!
You just sit silently and watch,
As your love tears me apart.
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Comments: 12

Emo-Artist-Midnight [2012-06-16 20:19:04 +0000 UTC]

Dang... This is awesome. I really loved reading it. Very, very deep!

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FollowingStars In reply to Emo-Artist-Midnight [2012-06-16 20:44:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I write best when mere words cannot express my feelings.

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Emo-Artist-Midnight In reply to FollowingStars [2012-06-20 22:00:23 +0000 UTC]

I know right? It makes you feel more free.

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FollowingStars In reply to Emo-Artist-Midnight [2012-06-21 10:05:06 +0000 UTC]

makes me feel all clean and new.

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Emo-Artist-Midnight In reply to FollowingStars [2012-07-05 21:05:03 +0000 UTC]

That's the good thing about poetry it makes you feel that way.

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ZombieQueen13 [2012-03-20 01:05:54 +0000 UTC]

That made my heart flutter slightly. Wonderful!

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FollowingStars In reply to ZombieQueen13 [2012-03-20 14:06:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I wrote this whilst thinking of this guy.... I'M SO CONFLICTED!

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smurfeyn [2012-03-18 21:35:34 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful.
Just simply brilliant

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FollowingStars In reply to smurfeyn [2012-03-19 16:39:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! It's a turbulent time in my life....POETRY TIME!

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smurfeyn In reply to FollowingStars [2012-03-20 16:08:06 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome
And damned right, when nothing goes your way, you make art

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WRITERandPOET [2012-03-17 20:49:57 +0000 UTC]

This was supposed to be a yes for

Would you please resubmit?

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FollowingStars In reply to WRITERandPOET [2012-03-17 20:51:38 +0000 UTC]

No problem! Gave me a chance to submit something else too.

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