Comments: 12
Shade-Duelist [2011-04-10 06:54:01 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
The image has a beautiful setup, the blue tones giving the image an air of sadness and despair that I believe the artist wanted to capture (I read a chapter, and the story is divine!). The white of the moon and the red of her eyes and the stone of the pendant provide some interesting counterpoints to the multitude of blue tones in the image.
Sadly enough, the technique can still be somewhat refined. There are still some rough edges where too little was cut away from the original image (around the elf ears and at the bottom of the dress) and some areas where I suspect too much was cut away (at the left side of her dress, where it looks a bit 'edged'). Also, it bothers me that the pendants' resolution is clearly less than the model's, so they also look a bit off.
But then we reach the impact, the 'wow' effect of the image, and we return to the above analysis: the image oozes sadness, right the way you wanted it, and you're drawn to look at her eyes, which are - truly - the mirrors of the soul.
All in all: this image is nice, but if you ever edit or re-do this piece with some attention to the remaining 'white dots' around the pieces you use for the collage and the resolution of the images used, you'll have a stunning piece of art that's bound to turn heads!
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nitch-stock [2011-04-12 01:11:02 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the link.
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ScarletJune [2011-04-11 13:26:44 +0000 UTC]
ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!
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Aeltari [2011-04-09 22:27:59 +0000 UTC]
OH wow! Welcome to the wonderful world of manips! I hope you will get addicted to this like me hehe. You used wonderful Linda as a model that is great! Even my pendants found a way in this lovely piece...isnt it great to bring your stories to life? I hope there will be more.
I am NOT critiquing this because it is a damn great first manip!
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Aeltari In reply to Fomalhaut48 [2011-04-10 02:29:01 +0000 UTC]
It is a whole new world, and boy is it a large one. There is always so much to learn. I find the best way is to just get the idea and start on it. As you are working you will get ideas and questions...how do I do X or X...then you seek the answers.
Feel free to ask me anytime you have a question about manips. If I cannot answer it I will try and find out for you.
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