Comments: 25
DoveAngel8 [2014-11-15 01:01:40 +0000 UTC]
Well done!
*Silver Scribe Award*
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Drowning-beneath [2014-11-14 23:16:54 +0000 UTC]
The poem is beautiful. Now if only everyone thought the same as you.
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PalladiumX-21093 [2014-11-14 22:41:21 +0000 UTC]
This is such a beautiful poem! I love the rhyme scheme too!
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ThatAnnoyingRabbit [2014-11-14 19:03:56 +0000 UTC]
Congrats on the well deserved DD!Ā Ā
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shep4life [2014-11-14 17:47:37 +0000 UTC]
I see one circumstance and declare "life is misery,"
determined to miss the splendor of a thousand miles of forest
for the decay of a single tree.
a sphere of light and shade fully owned by neither.
This is stunning work
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RamsEyeSupply [2014-11-14 16:59:51 +0000 UTC]
Very true words. Very nice work! Congrats on the DD.
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SchmidtMatDT [2014-11-14 09:17:45 +0000 UTC]
aww yes! I seldom read literary deviations, but this really unfolded itself.
this existence is so infinitely bigger than ourselves, and judging it by the tiny proportions we see and (think) we understand, is just fickle.
very well put! congrats!
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yankees51 [2010-01-05 02:00:47 +0000 UTC]
I love it. It bugs me too when people try to squeeze things that are too broad into narrow spaces. I'm big on not clenching on to any particular belief and asking to be proved wrong, and this poem definitely touched that nerve for me. Attaboy
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tairngir [2010-01-03 14:18:03 +0000 UTC]
I love the depth to the message in this poem.
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Formlessforce In reply to tairngir [2010-01-03 22:21:45 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. The message here is important to me, so it's good to hear that you appreciate it.
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hewsan [2009-11-14 01:45:13 +0000 UTC]
Isn't the world...
by necessity based on what one sees and experiences. Humans do have the advantage of being able to share there "visions" either through personal interactions or through recorded media (books, films, etc)
But in the end, each of our worlds are what is personally experienced.
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Formlessforce In reply to hewsan [2009-11-14 01:51:50 +0000 UTC]
Definitely. But people also need to understand that other people see things differently, and their own perspective is not necessarily the only one.
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