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forsakensoul26 — Commission - Gaian Couple
Published: 2009-09-24 04:08:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 267; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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A rare commission I did on Gaiaonline. The very first finished product (except a chibi) that I did on my new Photoshop CS3, exciiiiiting.I'm pleased with how this turned out. The eyes bother me, and look exceedingly... how to put it. Fake? I don't know how to phrase it. I know they'll look fake without going into large amounts of shading, but these look... extra weird to me, like... they have the look people get when they space out. And I can't for the life of me fix it. D: But other than that little detail, I"m pretty darn pleased with this.
I would love a little critique on this, even if I don't have that handy little feature.
art (c) me
people/characters are/belong to Baise de Long on gaia.
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Comments: 8
Wowoww! This is amazing <3
I don't know, maybe if they were looking into eachothers eyes?
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thank you
I don't know how I'd make them do that with the pose I chose, but I agree they might look less.. spacey if they weren't just looking off into the distance. XD
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Hmm... well, in any case, it's great. The girl in particular looks like she could be staring at an imaginary unicorn.. But I like that! xD
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Mmmm I don't think they looked spaced out. I don't really wanna be a critic either though. Perhaps it's then size of the eyes? or maybe positioning?
It's very good though, I'm kind of envious.
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Oh thank you!
I feel like it's the shines in the eyes that do it, they look too glassy-eyed but oh well! The commissioner liked it
Don't be envious! D:
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x3
It might be. But it's good they liked it.
I like it too though x3
D= but I am. you draw so lovely!
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Well thank you! 
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I'm glad you're happy.
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