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Published: 2017-01-05 17:10:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 336; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 0
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That’s lovely, eye-catching photograph. I love the composition and angle where you put the focus rose more to the left, giving a space on the right, I think there’s a unique vision to it. Not to mention the pink color of the roses stood out very nicely against the contrasting greens with various focus. And there happened to be an ant on the rose’s petal that makes the whole photo more interesting, like it’s a ‘story’ of how nature or living creatures interact, so it’s not just a photo of beautiful roses, although in itself it might be enough too.
There are actually not many objects and colors in this photo but I think you’ve managed to create a wonderful shot which is far from boring, one would love to look at this photo for a long time, paying attention to its details.
So overall I think you did very well in capturing that precious moment when an ant was perching on the rose, with unique vision and photography skill too. If you’re looking for a suggestion for improvement however, you might want to somehow capture the rose in a way that the lighting is not too bright because I think this way there’s too much white. With all the white and light pink against the green, the contrast seems too sharp but then maybe it’s my personal taste. Keep up the good work.e.deviantart.net/emoticons/p/p… " width="11" height="10" alt="
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I really love this photograph, the angle and the position of the ant is perfect and the colours contrast beautifully. The way the camera focuses with the background out of focus, complements the flower and makes it stand out which gives the photograph much more impact.
In terms of the ratings, Impact received 5 stars because as I've said, the camera is out of focus in the background which makes the flower stand out, and the ant adds more life to the photo. This photograph stood out among others.
Technique also received 5 stars, The angle and lighting are perfect for this photograph, and all the positioning as well.
Originality received 4.5 stars because flowers commonly photographed but the ant in this photo makes it seem more original.
Vision received 4 stars because while the colours, angles and lighting are all perfect, the flower is slightly wilted/crumpled and some grass is seen on top of the left of the flower. This is such a small thing and hardly affect the photo but the blade of grass on the left does stand out a bit, I'm not sure id this was intentional or not. Otherwise, the 'vision' is perfect.
Overall, the look of the photo is beautiful, powerful and eye catching. I really love this photo!
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Thank you so much for taking the time to write such a thoughtful critique! I really appreciate your feedback!
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You're very welcome
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Hi, i came by to write a critique.
I see a great photograph of an awesome Rose.
I love the one little cute insect on it, is it a bee?
I cant see it, but that is me.e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Great how you established the Rose in all her splender right on the center focus of the Photograph.
You did a good job, after all it is not easy to shoot such an nature scene.
The light is well done to.
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There is one small detail, i noticed at the left-foreground,
the leaves are left alone in the shadow.
The angle of the total perspective is good though.
I am not a professional critique writer, i am just suggesting:
I recommend, to give the corner in photographs of flowers some light to.
All together, the Rose photograph cached my eyes.
I can see you are very talented.
I hope to see more of your work.
Its not that i love Roses the most but this photograph do fascinates me a lot.
Happy 2017!
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Thank you for the critique! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the feedback!
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Thanks for the response.
You most welcome.
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This is beautiful, definitely worth more than 10 points.
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Aww thank you, that's very kind of you to say so. But no one ever purchases downloads so I don't expect even 10 points.
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