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Published: 2010-04-04 04:04:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 1281; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 34
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Another Dokugasona. Crits appreciated~Art © Me
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I never commented on this here? Tch. Silly me.
It's a startlingly good likeness... and I'm actually wearing those socks today. ::cheeky wink::
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/giggle
I'm glad you like it!
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Ah, understatement. "Like" doesn't even begin to cover it.
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Haha, thank you! It t'was my first rooster.
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Aww, this is cute. I love the colors. The birds are well drawn!
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Thank you! I admit to kind of taking the lazy way out for the most part though. 
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Ehhh, I do that too. xDD
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DARLIIIING. Wtf is a Dokugasona?
You know I dislike to crit due to my lack of experience with anatomy, but I hope this is some assistance to you regardless:
I'm not sure if it's the angle or what, but the hand touching her face seems smaller compared to the other (the arm itself, too). Her leg on our left also looks a bit... off, compared to the other leg. It almost seems like the perspective is supposed to be more toward us (like, the knee should be kind of pointing in our direction, rather than off to the side, if that makes sense). At least, I think that position might flow easier with the curve of her body.
I dunno wtf I'm talking about, ha ha. But I fucking love her hair. 
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your critique! I had SO much trouble with the hand/arm on the right (her left). I had to say I was lazy but.. after a while I had to just settle with 'okay' since I just looked at it SO long I couldn't SEE the mistakes! Yaknow? And no one was online to ask. ):
The leg bothered me a bit too, I think it's because I made a definite line all the way through.. and I was really struggling to shade it correctly. >.<
Thank you thank you~!
A Dokugasona is a person the way they look in regards to www.dokuga.com ! Kind of a physical representation of yourself but with little quirks like you know.. fox ears and tail or pet chickens or whatever. XD Dokuga is a SessKag fansite. WONDERFUL fanfictions, art, and the people there are amazing too.
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