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Himitsu-Kodoku [2011-04-28 22:04:27 +0000 UTC]
Hurray for flat chests!! XD
She's so pretty *.*
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Onihikage [2011-04-26 05:21:55 +0000 UTC]
I hate to rain on your parade, but it doesn't look so perfect to me...
The main issue I have with this is that her whole left side seems bigger than her right side, which is odd since her right side should be closer. It makes her right arm look really thin, almost shriveled. Speaking of that arm, a hand on the hip should leave the elbow bent at somewhere around a right angle, so as it is now it also looks really short. I guess in general, that whole arm and hand need work. But I'll give you this - if there were a kid standing next to her, that arm would be perfect for them!
Another thing is that her neck seems really long, her head needs brought down another chin's distance, I think. Lastly, her right breast seems a little smaller, and very flat compared to the left, but I regret to say that I really can't think of a method of changing it to match better. Sorry I can't help there!
I hope that wasn't heavy or discouraging - on the contrary, I really think you're making great progress overall, and your art style is becoming very refined. It's just a few little things here and there escaped your notice, that's all! Keep working hard and one day you'll make it to where you want to be
I just can't let it go at that, though - now I have to say the things that look good to me! The legs, belly, back/waist, the head itself (minus the neck), and the bones around her neck, all of these things are very well drawn, good job! And THAT HAIR! *o* Awesome - keep up the great work!
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naruhina0 [2011-04-24 19:37:39 +0000 UTC]
awesome this must have been great 2 see u color ito.o
but yeah she does look pretty and i bet shock will love it and i love her art as well^w^
she will probly say its adorbz xDD
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Match25 [2011-04-24 16:24:18 +0000 UTC]
shes cute
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FoxxBrush In reply to Match25 [2011-04-24 17:53:48 +0000 UTC]
haha thanks ^^
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Kryione [2011-04-24 11:56:45 +0000 UTC]
has a refreshing feel into it...
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FoxxBrush In reply to Kryione [2011-04-24 17:53:55 +0000 UTC]
good ^^ It should :3
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Lawman09 [2011-04-24 08:42:00 +0000 UTC]
Lee: Very nice! I approve of your color choice!
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FoxxBrush In reply to Lawman09 [2011-04-24 17:54:04 +0000 UTC]
lol I know right? X3
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Lawman09 In reply to FoxxBrush [2011-04-24 20:25:19 +0000 UTC]
Lee: Very correct!
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