Comments: 67
fr31g31st In reply to ??? [2010-10-03 19:36:55 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your kind words and have fun with my gallery
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al3ayali [2010-09-23 07:53:27 +0000 UTC]
nice capture
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descendant [2010-09-20 07:25:49 +0000 UTC]
incredible capture. love it.
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ToriBoriDori [2010-09-19 07:30:24 +0000 UTC]
This one actually made me smile and giggle out loud.
So well done, perfect framing, lighting everything
so very very fantastic
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arefixe0408 [2010-09-18 09:44:47 +0000 UTC]
nice work
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BWarner [2010-09-18 08:32:33 +0000 UTC]
This is a fantastic piece! The silhouetting of the child is done extremely tastefully, with just a hint of color framing the character. The setting itself shows plenty of activity, while at the same time, an easy calm as a whole. This latter bit is helped by the desaturation and color cast. The square composition is well chosen in this case, and all of the elements are well-placed within the frame. The young Worker is placed aggressively high, which I really dig.
The only "negatives" I can pick up are nitpicks, and total artistic choices. I would personally clone out the line in the near boot, as it is the sole element that shows within the form of the silhouette, which somewhat detracts from its impact. And secondly, I'd personally prefer a (very) slightly shallower depth of field, which would put a little more emphasis on the primary point of interest, and give a bit more cohesiveness to the image. Do the people in the background matter? Sure, in terms of setting a tone for the scene. But I'd prefer if they were even more defocused, instead of straddling the line between in- and out-of-focus; narrowing the plane of focus would lend more of a sense of deliberateness to the piece. (I do really like that they're also silhouetted, though!)
All in all, I'm a huge fan of this piece. Kudos!
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fr31g31st In reply to BWarner [2010-09-18 09:00:26 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for you in-depth comment, you made some very good points and I really appreciate especially the "negatives". I've made some little adjustments to the photo, maybe this looks a bit more like what you had in mind?
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