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Page one of nine. Manga style comic. This shtuff is actually QUITE HARD TO DO....so if I find it posted elsewhere by some little snot...I'ma beat you with a toaster...hence the watermarks...also....current mood: meeved....
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Original Naruto concept belongs to Kishimoto Masashi (thank you for ending the filler....*chu*)
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sigh I was wanting to know the name of the fic this is for I can not seem to find it
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mmmm...it's by r3b3llious r3b3l on ff.net....I think it's called team 7...if not...they're all archived there. It's a one shot.
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i know that story.. sad... ;__;
nicely done, but still sad..
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Nicely done!
I agree Kakashi is the best done in this. You got they style down really well for him, and almost as well for Naruto.
Sasuke and Sakura could be a little closer, but still pretty damn good. One thing is that the mouth on Sakura is an expression you usually only see on guys and it's more of a grimace on her (sorry but it's just how I'm seeing it). A more feminine open mouth or small grin might be more effective...I don't know...*doesn't like giving critisim when can't point out how to fix it*.
But yeah, well done, and nice shading gradient for the background as well!
Have fun with the rest...
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Thanks hun! Yeah im most happy with Kakashi and the lower Naruto...mmm, I totally didn't even think about that for Sakura, but she IS kinda manly...so we'll let it slide. XD lol.
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Aaaaw, it's based on Sarge's 'Teamwork', am I right?
Wonderful artwork, really. ANd I like the composition, too. ^^
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mmm...maaaaybe...I can't remember what the stories called, I just have a run-down of the pages she wants
Thank you every much!
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Nice. 
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Cant wait for more!
I know it's hard, so I wont rush you! Take your time! Very well done by the way! 
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SO PRETTY!!!!!
one question.... Are we supposed to read left to right or right to left? cause this page makes it a little bit difficult to tell.
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lolz...I realized that after...its supposed to be right to left...but they way its positioned you can pretty well read it anyway you want...just...its actually sakura that talks first, then sasuke, then sakura again, kakashi and then sasuke (down by narutos head)
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I think I subconciously drew him better....*doesnt like sasuke*...but I must rectify this...cause its about Naruto...not 'Kashi!!! *note to self...make Kakashi not as pretty in next panels...make Sasuke and Naru-chan look better"
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hahaha XD it may be the cause
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*ish paranoid* Watermark needs to be bigger... BIGGER... I don't want some "little snot" stealing your work, either, cause I'll do more than beat them with a toaster! I'll send Genma after 'em! And if they like that, then I'll send Itachi 
But on another note, 
I'm so happy with it, you have no idea ^^ I love it so much, so thank you ^^
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if I make it any bigger....you won't be able to see anything 
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Haha, but bigger is better.. ARTS KICKS ASS! ... aw, damn, you're not in Sciences anymore, so that doesn't work anymore... ah well... lol.
And don't kill yourself... If you can't get them done before the end of December, it's okay
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