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Published: 2016-06-23 07:34:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 538; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 0
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Decided to clean up the lines a little bit. Seriously considering selling this as a print...//EDIT: hahaha, forgot I could request critiques again! Please actually critique it and not just have an excuse to butter it up, I'd really appreciate it. I want to get better.
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I like this version better. Their eyes are clearer. I thought the thick lines of the previous version were a bit distracting.
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Ah, yes, a background might help, too? for contrast... Would you mind bringing up other points that would make it better?
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How about darkening it (to give it a more vague feel) and making the glowing eyes as light sources.
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Mhm, go on. Anything else?
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If your able to blur anything on your picture, blur Gaster. Remember he is an entity that wasn't supposed to exist in game.
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Oh I remember alright
Blurs are kind of hard on the program I use, so maybe I'll export it and use Photoshop.Β
Oh, yes this is very good. Please, keep going!
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Give pypyrus and sans some color. Gaster and his followers have black and white colorschemes in the colorful world of undertale, it shows that they don't belong in it.
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I think having them black-and-white in this situation nods to the Gaster follower outsiderness, at least in this case. I'd prefer to focus the color on their eyes.Β
But please do keep going if you have any more suggestions!!
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Remove the shading from Gaster, so he'll seem like someone that wasn't there or it's make him seem odd and ghostly.
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hm, I'll look into that.
Thank you very much, you've been very helpful and honestΒ
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Well you actually ask for critiques. Some artist around here get mad at me for fooling around instead of giving them thoughtful critiques (even though they don't even ask for them).
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How so? And... what do you consider "fooling around"?
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Just making some jokes (that are relevant to the drawing) or showing off my responses to the drawing with a YouTube video.
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Hmm, well sometimes artists don't request critiques for a reason, but I wouldn't know. Yeah, I asked for critiques, but I don't mind that it came in comment form.
Well, I'm glad you were able to tell me what you thought, thank you!Β
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That all is Papyrus's eye? (sorry for my English :v ) but it's beautiful.
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Yes, that's Papyrus' eye. It is not canon, but it is unanimously accepted among the fandom.
Thank you!
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