Comments: 31
SnowStormNinja24 [2015-08-30 19:39:25 +0000 UTC]
puny matchsticks
cannot compare
to the light that burns
above.
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Aliyah-Zoe [2015-07-27 12:55:25 +0000 UTC]
I like all the color in this one!
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Samhiisi [2015-07-24 18:04:14 +0000 UTC]
I like the middle. Soundsl like our weather. xD
Oh, I need a writers retreat too. Someplace offline and nice...
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SECRET-NINJA-SUPER-M [2015-07-23 15:14:14 +0000 UTC]
I love the ending~ I think my moth went dry... I'll get some water in a minute. The background is interesting, too, the blues don't detract from the heat at all, in fact they remind me of the blinding summer sky!
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ReconCookieMons [2015-07-23 04:15:47 +0000 UTC]
The first two stanzas are my feelings for summer, adding in the last perfectly fits my desire to go outside in the summer... Insert sarcastic pun asking how you know my life so well.
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ilyilaice [2015-07-22 17:26:18 +0000 UTC]
love the rhymes on this one!
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Leah084 [2015-07-22 16:42:43 +0000 UTC]
Wow... beautiful
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