Comments: 10
Laur720 [2015-05-13 15:28:22 +0000 UTC]
lol I love that this one is a rose..or crooked lollipop.
I like the way the last lines form into the stem.
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FridgePoetProject In reply to Laur720 [2015-05-14 05:21:22 +0000 UTC]
Okay. You have no idea how ridiculously happy it made me to see this thing favorited under "Plants." It jump started a serious case of the gleeful giggles that are going to follow me through the weekend, at the very least. AND I now have someone who appreciates the demented lollipop effect of the "rose" with me.
Have I told you lately that you rock?
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sairey [2015-05-02 19:44:39 +0000 UTC]
Ugh, the last line is flawless. Love your polysyndeton.
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FridgePoetProject In reply to sairey [2015-05-03 04:46:43 +0000 UTC]
If I had to pick one that reminded me of you (at least, the essence of you that comes through your work), this one would be it. Here's to polysyndenton {and to the sorely underused word "polysyndenton" itself, which surely earns a toast of its own accord}!
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sairey In reply to FridgePoetProject [2015-05-03 05:22:15 +0000 UTC]
Maybe that was why I took such an immediate liking to this one. It really seems to echo the aura that my writing generally exudes -- I feel like our writing style is very similar. c:
To polysyndeton~!
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