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acrei [2011-05-28 07:37:54 +0000 UTC]
FFFFFFFFFFF this is amazing D:
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acrei In reply to Frostbite465 [2011-05-28 07:47:42 +0000 UTC]
Fff- you're just improving so much XD I'm jealous! <3 That shading is awesome.
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Frostbite465 In reply to acrei [2011-05-28 07:57:40 +0000 UTC]
Thanks again XD
Critique?
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acrei In reply to Frostbite465 [2011-05-28 11:45:10 +0000 UTC]
No problem! >w< And sure. By the way.. would you mind critiquing this please? [link]
So... I guess I'll start on the improvement-stuff first. The anatomy was the first thing that caught my eye. I was a bit surprised as you usually do such a good job with it. It's still good, but a little unbalanced. For example, Scarlett just looks a little stiff in general. Especially her head, back, tail, and front legs especially. They look a little too awkward and close to her head. Lach is a bit better, though his back [the part that starts low and slopes up] is positioned a bit too low, I think. And his back legs are a little too close..? I'm not going to go into detail into this, because you caught it, but their facial expressions look a little awkward. I don't think there are any more problems, except maybe the tree looks a bit hurried. But that could just be for stylistic purposes, I guess XD
The good-
As usual.. your shading is superb. Love the angle that the light comes from and the perspective in general. See your "messy" style making an even bigger comeback- which looks great with your style of lineart and shading. The newer, sort of detailed fur shading on Lach looks fantastic, maybe you should refine it a little, like make the edges of the lines a bit sharper, if possible. And again, as usual, your color scheme is awesome I just sort of love the "warmth" that comes out from the middle. Love your border and of course, your airbrushy style XD
I think that's all..? Anyways, for an overall score I'd give this an 8/10! Nice job!~
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acrei In reply to Frostbite465 [2011-06-13 00:15:52 +0000 UTC]
Hehe X,D It's no problem! 8,D
And yay! Thank you sosososo much! :3
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Leopardstar31 [2011-05-28 06:17:24 +0000 UTC]
Wow! the lighting in this picture is awesome! i love the dogs poses, it does seem like theyre just running. And lach's face looks funny! (in the good way (: )
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