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Published: 2011-05-07 23:05:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 526; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 10
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Description ~Little-Moccasins caught my 6,789 kiriban

This is her warriors oc named Bayleaf.


And for the longest time I have had trouble with kitties, but I like how tis came out ^^ Critiques please

character (c) ~Little-Moccasins

Art (c) me

yes I know the shadows below her are facing the wrong way shhhh.
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Comments: 19

KitzehKat [2011-05-08 18:36:42 +0000 UTC]

pretty epic there

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Frostbite465 In reply to KitzehKat [2011-05-08 18:56:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Klissie [2011-05-08 05:46:41 +0000 UTC]

cool!

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Frostbite465 In reply to Klissie [2011-05-08 14:19:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks :3

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acrei [2011-05-08 03:10:04 +0000 UTC]

Well, first things first.. the lineart is really different than your normal style- which is not bad at all, it looks awesome! ^^ It just seems a little awkward at certain bits... like maybe the front leg that's sticking out- maybe because the tail/chest areas are really fluffy and the lines for the leg is really straight.. what about coloring the lines, it might make the whole thing blend together more. Next is... shading! Of course.. I have to mention this every time I critique something of yours XD It's just AMAZING, I don't know how the hell you pull it off, because it'd look really messy and awkward on most other styles, but on your style, it just like.. blows my head off O_O. It's just blended so neatly, especially on the hind leg and chest areas.... I could go on and on about this but yeah XD You probably don't want to hear me rambling again The only thing wrong with the shading is probably the shading on the face is a little rough, and the shadows below her are facing the wrong way, but you already mentioned it in the description so yeah XD. Next is.. color.. I'm always so jealous of your color schematics *___* I mean, they ALWAYS, always blend in so well..! I have nothing to say here, it's just that awesome <3. The background leaves a little to be desired, it's a bit simple.. but that's okay, because it doesn't seem like you were going to put a lot of focus in the background anyways. I like the "fireflies", and how you added a bunch of small ones other than the one that Bayleaf was staring at- and nice that you added them in different opacity levels, color, and size- it gives it a sense of depth. For anatomy.. well, what do I have to say here? Your grasp on anatomy is excellent, as always. c: Just a thing is maybe making the lines more flowy and graceful.. maybe make the back more curvy, cats sort of seem to give off that feeling a lot more than wolves and such XD Well.. sorry for the wall of text! O.O Anyways, this picture was amazing <3

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Frostbite465 In reply to acrei [2011-05-08 14:19:39 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh, thanks, this helps alot ^^

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acrei In reply to Frostbite465 [2011-05-09 07:03:45 +0000 UTC]

No problem! XD So glad I helped <3

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acrei [2011-05-08 01:31:25 +0000 UTC]

D'aww, love it! <3

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Frostbite465 In reply to acrei [2011-05-08 01:41:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks :3

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acrei In reply to Frostbite465 [2011-05-08 02:13:59 +0000 UTC]

No problem! <3

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Frostbite465 In reply to acrei [2011-05-08 02:52:11 +0000 UTC]



Hey, would you mind critiquing?

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acrei In reply to Frostbite465 [2011-05-08 03:00:56 +0000 UTC]

Okay~! ^^

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Little-Moccasins [2011-05-08 00:22:25 +0000 UTC]

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There are no words to describe this. Wait I can think of three...

I LOVE THIS!!!

Omg, thank you so much.

You are an amazing artist!

Thank you SOOOOOO much. She is perfect.

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Frostbite465 In reply to Little-Moccasins [2011-05-08 01:12:47 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I'm glad you like this

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Little-Moccasins In reply to Frostbite465 [2011-05-08 01:13:42 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE it.

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Kwizkaii [2011-05-07 23:17:34 +0000 UTC]

lovely colors

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Frostbite465 In reply to Kwizkaii [2011-05-07 23:18:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

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Sethya [2011-05-07 23:15:55 +0000 UTC]

i love the color schematic of this!

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Frostbite465 In reply to Sethya [2011-05-07 23:18:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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