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Sometimes you get in the zone driving around on rainy days and forget to keep watch for random dudes moping around in the middle of the street haha
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I would do something liek thta. she makes me think of me.
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That's awesome!
my main focus on interest is relatibility. since there's no action or fantasy in this story.
so that's really great.
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well I'm stupid like that!! and I yeah just do that stuff
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Mind if I were to give a mini critique of some of the stuff I see?
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Sure.
as in.
I don't mind.
Go right ahead. haha
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Well you're good at keeping the characters fairly consistent in their proportions. Though Claire is missing the pattern on her shirt in the last panel.
I also think the hospital room could use more in the background, like medical equipment, but use flat colors so it doesn't draw attention from the characters.
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I'll try to improve the backgrounds in time.
I could probably do better on them if I didn't hate em' so much. haha
I'm devoting most all of my time to art now, so everything will definitely show improvement within a month or so.
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I really like the design for the girl. She's cute. Does she have a name?
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