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Published: 2009-04-09 03:27:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 2234; Favourites: 88; Downloads: 56
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Maybe they should look less bored.The characters don't feel quite "settled in" with the background. I really gotta learn to sketch out a background first, before getting into the characters. Color coordination may need work too.
critiques appreciated. thanks :]
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The guy looks more cool/confident than bored, which works just fine. I'd darken the foreground up considerably and play some of that blue-green light coming off their boards and weapons on the bg and the girls/guy's faces. Up the contrast a fair bit, maybe some more saturated colours on the girls face..?
Just some ideas ;D It's coming along beautifully.
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actually wow, I really did forget about the weapon/board lights' effect on the people's skin. Thanks a lot for your input! I'll toy around with the contrast and saturation
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No worries! Looking forward to seeing more!
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awesome! 
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They're kinda of..
"One more chase after the breakfast!" XP
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I cant find nothing to criticize XD It looks really wonderful!
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The background's really good, actually - it really gives the feeling of moving at high speeds, unable to see any detail of your surroundings.
I WANT ONE OF THOSE BOARDS
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Yeah, the guy in the back looks a little bored, but I dig the bg. The shadowy hand is a nice touch. The plexi boards are cool looking and they're an interesting idea. Good dynamic poses
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this looks perfect! but yeah they do look boerd.. I wish i knew how do do a DD
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