Comments: 40
LordLaurance [2017-07-22 04:11:13 +0000 UTC]
Really great story! I have one question though. I was just wondering if you are from Europe. I'm only wondering because you used apostrophes instead of quotation marks when characters talked.
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AdrianKnight [2016-02-09 03:22:10 +0000 UTC]
loved it!! i wish there was more to this story tbh. so great!
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PJHPGF4evah [2015-08-30 06:08:46 +0000 UTC]
THE GIFS AREN'T HELPING AHAHAHAHAAHAHAH
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Hetaliaiskewl [2015-03-03 05:44:49 +0000 UTC]
You got me at, "A hungry, deranged Supernatural fan"
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Cryaotic64 [2014-12-11 04:47:30 +0000 UTC]
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Cryaotic64 [2014-11-27 01:31:30 +0000 UTC]
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SpawnofMorgoth [2013-11-15 13:53:42 +0000 UTC]
It's really hard to tell that this is your first. I like your portrayal of the actors, as it shows a romantic relationship, but they don't seem too overly obsessed with the reader. I also like the little competition between Sebastian and Misha because it adds to the humor and a little bit of drama at the same time. The only suggestion I could add would be to check your spelling, where there were one or two mistakes. Also, if you want to be a bit more technical, the dialog should be in "Quotation marks" not 'Apostrophes'.
Over all your plot, and detailed story telling make for a wonderful RPF.
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SpawnofMorgoth In reply to Fusion-of-Fantasy [2013-11-17 18:14:55 +0000 UTC]
And it means a lot to me that you would share this story with me, and all your other readers.
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nathyfaith [2013-11-11 17:52:35 +0000 UTC]
This was amazing! I love it to pieces, you just have to fix up the actors names some are misspelled otherwise great job!!
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Fusion-of-Fantasy In reply to nathyfaith [2013-11-12 05:50:55 +0000 UTC]
Oh whoops! Hehe thanks and thank you for your kind comment!
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punkrockpancake [2013-11-06 22:31:24 +0000 UTC]
Are you serious? This is your first ever fanfiction? It is flawless!
You are an amazing writer! Please, just keep going, that's the only tip I can give you!
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supernatural05 [2013-11-06 21:33:50 +0000 UTC]
this was so awesome!!!
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supernatural05 In reply to Fusion-of-Fantasy [2013-11-08 20:45:58 +0000 UTC]
welcome! and type in : icon dean spaz plz : (just no spaces) and you will get this:
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DeathFrisbee221B [2013-11-06 19:39:13 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god... That was bloody brilliant!
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ThisOneIsCrazy [2013-11-06 17:19:00 +0000 UTC]
Aawww there should be more Mishaxreader this was awesome xx
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ThisOneIsCrazy In reply to Fusion-of-Fantasy [2013-11-07 22:23:58 +0000 UTC]
just type :icon______plz: you can type anything you want, but it's better to preview it before, as some don't exist because they are basically accounts that are just used for the icons.
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Fate4Destiny [2013-11-05 11:09:43 +0000 UTC]
I never say this but: Oh my god.
That was much better than I expected for a first fan fiction. Amazing, in fact. If I saw that I would never assume that you didn't write often.
As for criticism, I actually have none. Take that as a compliment, because I usually find flaws in EVERYthing.
I am utterly speechless, I never expected this to be so good, so much like a writer who writes often (am I repeating myself? I can't find the proper words).
*hugs* Thanks for crediting me in your summary, and write some more!
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Fusion-of-Fantasy In reply to Fate4Destiny [2013-11-06 01:31:52 +0000 UTC]
Oh thank you so, so much! You have no idea how much that means to me.
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