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suomar [2017-08-23 17:35:36 +0000 UTC]
This is far from a failure! I think you nailed it especially with the colors, it's what first caught my attention, in fact. It's true that the light source is a little mysterious (the children could have looked better if they were a little darker, since they are in his shadow (heh) like Rosakaz said) but I really like the light coming from the right, by increasing that and decreasing the light in other parts you could have made the man stand out a bit more as well as created some intensity in the picture. The details are absolutely awesome and his face is great. One thing I'd double check is his anatomy, or rather the size of his head compared to his body, I'm not familiar with this character but considering he has a family I assume he's an adult, and his head looks a tiny bit too big for the body of an adult man. Overall though, I think this is a really good piece and you shouldn't worry about taking a longer time. Efficiency is important but so is learning and at least for me, the longer I spend on a drawing the better it becomes and the next time I draw something as complicated, it will be a lot faster. I'm especially glad you took the time to create a proper background, I think it brought your piece on a whole new level!
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Rosakaz [2017-08-21 13:15:58 +0000 UTC]
Great job with the background levels!
The light source seems to be coming from Shadow's left hand side so I think he'd lay a shadow on the children since it's a bright light (unless there's light coming from the children's right hand side). That might match the overall lighting better and also bring the focus to the Commander.
Other than that this is looking good. The metals and the cloth look nice too. They have different reflections like materials like that should behave.
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Rosakaz In reply to Galder [2017-08-21 13:33:03 +0000 UTC]
No problem! Oh, one thing. How do you work with layers? Do you paint everything from lights to shadows to the same layer?
I tend to use shadows on separate layer in multiply so it's easy to change the opacity and find the perfect amount of shade. Here I think I'd try to leave some light on the children's face's, just because faces are important, unless the commander's body should completely block the light. With the right amount of shadows to the children's right hand side you can tie them better to the background, which is a lot darker around the kids.
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Galder In reply to Rosakaz [2017-08-21 13:39:26 +0000 UTC]
It varies from piece to piece but I tend to have a seperate layer for shadows and lights. As you can see on the boy's face and his elbow, I tried to evoke just that, but was not forceful enough. The girl's face and hair should be reshaded completely. I think the culprit might also be my final messing with levels(something I need much more practice with).. which might have hurt that area a bit as I brightened the image overall. I'll try to rework it.
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LeilaAscariz [2017-08-18 19:40:09 +0000 UTC]
Maybe it took effort and time but you can feel proud of it, as you got a really good result.
I have praised your expressiveness before and it is really remarkable here again both in Shadow and in the children.
The background is beautifully done and it doesn't steal the spotlight of the characters but adds to them, the poses are great and the details are too.
Great job!
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Galder In reply to LeilaAscariz [2017-08-19 06:16:59 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your kind words. I have realized that this was one of the first projects that had more than just one character in it, and found it very rewarding to draw. Whipping up one character in a vacuum might take fraction of time to finish, but I have definitely learned much more from this one.
Also, thank you for coming and sharing your thoughts on my work, it means a lot to me <3.
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LeilaAscariz In reply to Galder [2017-08-19 08:36:07 +0000 UTC]
My comments aren't always thoughtful but I don't like just commenting to say "wow, cool" as it shows support but doesn't seem very constructive to me.
But I love commenting art pieces that I like when I can say something more than just "cool" even if it's something stupid xD
I am realizing too how much a background even if it's simple, adds to a picture. I suck at backgrounds but I try to improve. Now I am on a really big project with 6 characters (the WiP is on my scraps page IIRC, or maybe on my B/W RPG stuff).
As I got many trades and commissions lately it's progressing slow (I always give priority to works for other people)
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LeilaAscariz In reply to Galder [2017-08-19 10:34:25 +0000 UTC]
Your backgrounds look nice to me.
And I love people dropping by just to say that they like what I do, but when it comes to me doing it I feel like I need to say something more
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LeilaAscariz In reply to Galder [2017-08-20 06:57:31 +0000 UTC]
I might drop a different meaningless set of letters on each profile and see what happens like:
Weeeeeeeee!!!
Eyyaaaaaa!
Hooooooo!!!
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