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bonehead2334 [2016-12-31 13:28:40 +0000 UTC]
what will she become? A werewolf? A shrunken person?
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chachazero90 [2016-11-21 16:07:47 +0000 UTC]
Interesting use of the sound effects xD!
The last panel builds so much suspense and Slacker-chan is LOVELY!!!
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JoeTheVenezuelan [2016-11-21 14:08:40 +0000 UTC]
Why is the 3rd and 4th panel separated? They look like they could be one big panel
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GameSquid In reply to JoeTheVenezuelan [2016-11-21 14:11:53 +0000 UTC]
It was meant to be like in that first panel, she's fine, not feeling anything. Then after, she starts feeling something from the potion.
Maybe not the greatest attempt...
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JoeTheVenezuelan In reply to GameSquid [2016-11-21 14:16:38 +0000 UTC]
I see what you mean. If it would have been up to me, i would have probably added "action lines" or a different background or zoom in a bit more, to add more emphasis on the change of mood. Otherwise, really nice comic m8 ^ u ^
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GameSquid In reply to JoeTheVenezuelan [2016-11-21 14:22:50 +0000 UTC]
I suppose you're right. I was taking cues similar to this: bit.ly/2eYnQMS
But thanks for the criticism anyway. Comic's not what I normally do, so it's nice to get feedback over it.
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JoeTheVenezuelan In reply to GameSquid [2016-11-21 18:08:24 +0000 UTC]
This link does not change my opinion, i would have told the same thing to the creator of the comic you sent me D: >
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GameSquid In reply to JoeTheVenezuelan [2016-11-21 18:39:18 +0000 UTC]
Hmm... It honestly isn't the first time I've seen this effect, but this is the first thing that comes to mind.
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