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Published: 2008-05-06 07:26:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 151; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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-later- WIP*(again) anatomical critique encouraged*
things that pointed out by hopefully appears fixed lol. (hey i tried!)
add the skateboard to help the pose making some sense. and moves the tail away so it looks more dynamic
other pic i would like to hear your opinion: [link]
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Whee!! I love all the detail here, great job 
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aw thank you! ill try to finish this ASAP lol
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not yet pal, not yet. still repairing it
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xD! That may be so... But I still think it looks kool.
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(I'm sorry if anything I point out was made on purpose, ahah X3)
Considering the position of his shoulders/head, he doesn't really seem to have a neck, or is keeping an unconfortable position. His right arm is too short, if it was down it would be to his hips. Unless I am mistaken on the gender, the chest seems too proeminent for a guy, since he's not that muscular. And feets should be about the same length as the head.
That said, you're improving, and fast XD
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hmm lol yea i have difficulties at his feet. now that i look at it i think BOTH arm are too short @_@. and you're not mistaken, he's just a skinny guy
lol thanks for all. y'know i think its all messed up coz im trying unusual pose 
kk ill fix it and inform ya again after some changes made (assuming its still repairable lol)
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The left arm can be blamed on perspective though XD
Naw, it's okay to try new things, that's exactly how you can improved. And if you can't fix everthing, just do what you can? It can always be kept in mind for next time~
I must say it does look better now with the fixes. Only thing I still see is the line of the neck; it's too close to the chin and makes his pose look unconfortable.
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