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Published: 2008-05-06 04:07:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 986; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Description Its Copeau Chivalier once again. with loose hair and simpler design for her mechanic parts. doing too much details could kill you when you're going to draw it again lol.

this pic was the 1st attempt for moving style. as you see the primary points im trying to change is forming more curves, shoulder, hips, waist line and general weight.

Im still stuck for facial parts tho, ill find a new way eventually.

not going to talk much about background etc for now. so Chivalier is basically a cyber-entity that lives up within your bytes of space and moving through interbutt. Her kind was called 'Catalyst' as they're the very hand, or considered as 'assistant' for Pseudo entity that control the spaces within itself, called 'Administrators'. They have no 'real' powers as their ability is to manipulate any data, and their assigned admin can also control the data itself to be manipulated for themselves. They're ever dynamic and changeable beings.

part of Utopianic project

Copeau Chivalier (c) obviously mine.
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Comments: 64

veroro [2008-05-23 11:07:57 +0000 UTC]

The little lines of color are distracting =o

Everything I would have wanted to say has already been said, ahah. So I'll just say that this is sexy, and your anatomy is improving : D

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Garkha In reply to veroro [2008-05-24 21:32:10 +0000 UTC]

Lol thanks

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ILoveKnives [2008-05-17 09:31:45 +0000 UTC]

I see you're using some softer shading. Well done!
Also the pose is dynamic and the design is nice (she's naked lol).
Though I wonder why a cyborg is wearing glasses

The energy/electric circles around her are a bit rough, though. They shouldn't have visible outlines, but have soft fading edges

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Garkha In reply to ILoveKnives [2008-05-17 20:19:30 +0000 UTC]

lol you're the only one that noticed why she wears a glasses lol its a fetish ' mine. dont bother lol XD

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ILoveKnives In reply to Garkha [2008-05-18 07:04:51 +0000 UTC]

yeah, I noticed many of your chatacters wear those.

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ZS-Creations [2008-05-17 08:36:44 +0000 UTC]

Very nicely done! Love the mechanical parts, especally the end of the tail!

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Garkha In reply to ZS-Creations [2008-05-17 20:20:17 +0000 UTC]

hehe thanks a lot

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ZS-Creations In reply to Garkha [2008-05-26 03:53:11 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Ginger-Storm [2008-05-12 21:39:23 +0000 UTC]

Wow, it looks really great, the colours are used so well!
Personally, for making this look a bit better, I would put a bit more detail into the hair. I would also put more clothes on her simply because it's hard to take a scantly clothed heroine seriously. but that's just me, if that's not what you're going for than that's ok.
I really love the lines that show movement, looks really good, and the colour makes it look almost energy charged

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Garkha In reply to Ginger-Storm [2008-05-14 02:52:18 +0000 UTC]

actually she's naked and those mechanical parts are truly her body.but since the way it positioned so it doesnt really looks like so, like she's wearing a kind of armor . Hair ok i admit i a bit lazy at that hehe. Thanks a lot for all ^^

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Firemimi [2008-05-12 00:57:16 +0000 UTC]

Awesome job, I LOVE the way you bounced around the colors. It makes it look loads more colorful. Though I think some of the lineart is a little too light and aren't very easy to see as the others things (ex. I can see the mech lineart just fine, but the skin, not so much) Overall I like it, it is neat and the coloring style is beautiful. The pose is dynamic. I pretty much love it! KUTGW

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Firemimi In reply to Firemimi [2008-05-13 01:53:42 +0000 UTC]

Well, more specifically a lineart that doesn't blend in with the skin too much. The lineart and the skin coloring is almost the same to me X.X But I don't know, I'm not great with coloring

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Garkha In reply to Firemimi [2008-05-12 20:32:00 +0000 UTC]

^^ Thanks a lot. the lineart is intended to be light but i might be too much eh lol XD ill try better next time

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Vyse-Dante [2008-05-11 16:17:14 +0000 UTC]

This is a very nice character concept The one thing that made me a bit iffy about the whole thing was that the front-left arm is the same color as the hair behind it and it was a little difficult for me to see. Other than that, I realy liked this

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Garkha In reply to Vyse-Dante [2008-05-12 20:30:44 +0000 UTC]

yeah i noticed the hair. it looks fine in real tho. i mean it just a slight tone change by the scanner lol. thanks ^^

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Vyse-Dante In reply to Garkha [2008-05-12 20:32:49 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure

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calicokatt [2008-05-11 12:06:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh awesome, it looks greaT!! I love the colours you've chosen here, they're nice and soft! Great job!

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Garkha In reply to calicokatt [2008-05-14 02:47:17 +0000 UTC]

hehe thankies ^^. yea kinda want to combine hard metal but soft human-like elements

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Meca-san [2008-05-10 14:58:24 +0000 UTC]

The colors in this are amazing
Very good job!

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Garkha In reply to Meca-san [2008-05-11 10:47:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~

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shicmap [2008-05-09 10:10:17 +0000 UTC]

warnanya keren

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Garkha In reply to shicmap [2008-05-11 10:50:50 +0000 UTC]

thankies ^^

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shicmap In reply to Garkha [2008-05-12 02:33:51 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome

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PickledAlice [2008-05-09 06:57:50 +0000 UTC]

oooo its even better colored!

I like how you choose oranges and brighter colors instead of the common computer-y colors like blue and grey!
Course green is one too? and some times pink?
. . . . . I love it!
-Fav-

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Garkha In reply to PickledAlice [2008-05-11 10:52:50 +0000 UTC]

Yay~. well the whole theme for the project is supposed to be pastel-y and yellow-y so i choose that kind of colors

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PickledAlice In reply to Garkha [2008-05-11 16:55:48 +0000 UTC]

Those are pastel's?
they came out awesome!
i have some pastels but im not patient enough to use them right lol

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Garkha In reply to PickledAlice [2008-05-12 20:28:52 +0000 UTC]

nah i mean the color impression. its pencils as always.

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PickledAlice In reply to Garkha [2008-05-12 21:46:14 +0000 UTC]

oh's well then!
NM.
jk

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AmaundraPaine [2008-05-09 06:42:18 +0000 UTC]

Very pretty! I love the pose and how pretty your colors always are!

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Garkha In reply to AmaundraPaine [2008-05-12 20:40:40 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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aviatorfox [2008-05-09 00:08:27 +0000 UTC]

oh! you made it perfect!
i wish you had outlined her whole body tho...

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Garkha In reply to aviatorfox [2008-05-09 04:15:41 +0000 UTC]

lol dunno that kind of coloring its kind of my style now. but thanks ill keep that in mind for later

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calicokatt [2008-05-08 12:55:25 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh I love the tail! This pose is great too, along with the detail I've always loved detail in works..

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Garkha In reply to calicokatt [2008-05-08 20:03:55 +0000 UTC]

yup details always good to see until it haunts you back when you wanna draw it again lol XD

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PickledAlice [2008-05-07 21:31:38 +0000 UTC]

ooooo we likie!
I know you comment on every picture i draw lol and i comment on 1/50.

But i likie this one!!!!! it looks like it moving!

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Garkha In reply to PickledAlice [2008-05-08 20:10:59 +0000 UTC]

lol no probbie, and thankies ^^

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Jimmypat [2008-05-06 14:31:51 +0000 UTC]

Woah! How cool! Very good action pose there, she looks to be ready for anything. Her look sort of reminds me of a Plug-Suit from 'Evangelion'. Very good work on the perspective here, you're improveing. The mechanics (including the tail) are very well detailed and constructed. Nothing else I could really say, it's good!

-James Daly

(P.S.: What happened to the damn comic? XD)

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Garkha In reply to Jimmypat [2008-05-07 03:07:10 +0000 UTC]

Lol thank you very much pal. the comic? oh god i dunno lol i lost the mood of drawing them in the same style lol XD. let see if i can continue it in a complet different style .

btw soo do you have a fancy in having a girl like that as your assitant? imagine you have a physical form in cyber world and you're the administrator, every administrator will accompanied by a girl like that, with their own unique designs. if you like the idea ill draw yer oc with the assistant as you described

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Jimmypat In reply to Garkha [2008-05-07 03:18:52 +0000 UTC]

S-seriously? You'd draw me with my own personal assistant? Sure, man! That'd be awesome! Thanks so much!

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Garkha In reply to Jimmypat [2008-05-07 03:28:53 +0000 UTC]

so describe what she would like to be? details!! D8

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Jimmypat In reply to Garkha [2008-05-08 19:38:28 +0000 UTC]

She looks to be about ten to maybe eleven years old. Her hair is gold like a field of corn, and her eyes are cherry red. To cover her mechanics and decency, I've given her a white summer dress, though some bits and pieces of machinery still show in her limbs, with small silver wings protruding from her back. Around her neck she wears a silver necklace; she carries herself with a feisty attitude of a free spirit and uses it to help those in need or to be strong against foes. Her name is Ruby Tuesday. :3

-James Daly

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Garkha In reply to Jimmypat [2008-05-08 19:44:34 +0000 UTC]

niice i have few images in mind now. got it. oh wow why Tuesday? lol.

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Jimmypat In reply to Garkha [2008-05-08 19:58:05 +0000 UTC]

Well, she's named after the Rolling Stone song, her name and personality comes from that tune. Her description comes from the song "Walk to the Water" by U2 with some changes. Real simple stuff, I wasn't really in the right mindset to think up anything too special. Any insperation for me nowadays comes from music, really. Pulled from tunes into pictures.

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Garkha In reply to Jimmypat [2008-05-09 04:16:07 +0000 UTC]

now that's a reference XD hehe ill go check those songs out

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Jimmypat In reply to Garkha [2008-05-09 04:33:48 +0000 UTC]

I think you'll enjoy them. Thanks again for doing this, I appreciate the love. X3

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Garkha In reply to Jimmypat [2008-05-11 10:51:40 +0000 UTC]

no probs. well i didnt mention the deadline tho didnt I? LOL XD jk. ill get it done nw.

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aviatorfox [2008-05-06 04:32:27 +0000 UTC]

maybe it's just me, but it seems like her legs come off at a wierd angle from her body...
i dunno... i really have no clue when it comes to drawing people
i really like it though. i'm sure you'll work out any kinks.

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Garkha In reply to aviatorfox [2008-05-06 04:37:33 +0000 UTC]

yes you're right about the legs many ppl said that lol XD. Thank you for pointing it out~

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shinigamiKLOU [2008-05-06 04:23:53 +0000 UTC]

Alrighty! I saw this on the front page by chance and it looks very promising You have a pretty good grasp on anatomy already, however - her right hand (the one farthest from the audience) seems a bit unproportionate to her other hand. If you could make the hand more slender by lengthening the fingers, most of that would be corrected. Her right foot also needs a little bit of work; if you could draw it at a more 3/4ths angle, that would fix that. I know people always say this, but - use photo referance! It actually helps with drawing tricky angles like that. Other than that... keep up the good work!

I hope my critique was helpful ._. I can never tell.

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Garkha In reply to shinigamiKLOU [2008-05-06 04:36:29 +0000 UTC]

;_; yeah im still having a lot of problems with perspective. Thank you very much ^^ it was really helpful. now i can see what i fail to see lol

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