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BGAgraphix [2008-07-04 20:39:03 +0000 UTC]
wow ! Looks amazing !
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darkMyke [2008-07-04 19:46:56 +0000 UTC]
Great work on textures and modelling, although I'm not sure I like the overprominent shadow. It simply dominates the image, I'd rather make it more subtle by moving the shadow of the leaves to the border areas and leave the middle of the image clean (which gives a strong focus point as well!).
Still, your pieces are always fantastic!
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gbrgraphix In reply to darkMyke [2008-07-04 20:48:40 +0000 UTC]
hmm yes, bit more gi sample in the middle do make it brighter, but also make it more flat. on the original version i did exactly what you said,
but since the color's tone almost the same only shadow and light give tune difference. so this time i add darkest and brightest point to the opposite corners, attached with a soft curve of shadow. so rather than a strong frocus point i want a shadow-light curve from upper right to the lower left corner
anyway that make the center of the composition exactly middle tone what is kinda confusing for the eye, maybe more light on the broken glass solve the problem. but i'm not sure :/ thanks for the suggestion anyway ^^
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darkMyke In reply to gbrgraphix [2008-07-05 19:29:31 +0000 UTC]
Well, I see that you have thought about it already. Good points, I guess it was worth the try. I'm not sure either but hey, as I've said: it is already high-quality work.
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