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Published: 2011-01-18 22:23:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 1096; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 52
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Experimenting painting with a new style.Abandoned dock!
Used this ref: [link]
I like it but it was hard to be consistent with all the different things I was trying out.
Let me know how you feel about it?
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Edit- Thanks to the ~blackrain8 for the feedback.
I've darkened the mood, added rain (not heavy), added a figure to sell scale and also added a custom made chainlink.
Hope it looks a bit better now?
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Comments: 26
I like your tone here, and I think your drawing is more interesting than the reference. Overall, This is amazing!!! may I know What did you use to draw this? only brush?
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Yep, I used the standard brushes and some custom ones for this painting.
Thanks for the comment.
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sorry for double post, I just have one critique on your drawing.. I am not a premium member, so I can't write a critique in critiques section...
Everything looks perfect. I don't know what it is called, the brown perspective line on the left side that looks like a fence... The object you wanted to show here is not clear enough.. I see it as a fence, but I am not sure what it is. And maybe you can add some dimension (3D) effect there, like shadow and highlight. Let's we call the line as a fence.. I see the fence is still flat while the others are perfect...the fence has only one color and the shadow and highlight are not placed well. maybe you can add more color there and some highlight and shadow so we can see what the object is and the detail.... The better if you can add some texture there.
Overall, this is a good artwork...
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Yep, you're definitely right about the fence and great spot as I added it minutes before calling it done.
If I get a chance i'll redo the fence.
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hahaha..no problem... If you can paint it better, this artwork would be a very nice painting... 
you're welcome, thanks for your information..
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For sure, I usually tend to leave a painting and move onto the next one.
If I make a mistake on this one i'll try and improve that on the next one.
Cheers my friend.
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Awesome, brilliant, love the changes, sets such a nice atmosphere
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Cheers, glad you like the updated one.
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actually, think you could do a remake with a darker tone, stormy and Rain?
I would love that
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Let me know if it looks any better now and thanks for the feedback.
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Looks like the Docks in that BRINK Game, really awesome pic, 10/10
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I don't know much about that game.
Cheers for the 10.
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should check it out, pretty awesome looking, try looking up the Shipyard video
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I find your painting more interesting than the ref xD. You created a great atmosphere and haunting mood.
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Thanks you, i've updated it to make it look a bit more haunting.
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