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ATTENTION: The following information is based off traditional mythology, current fantasy, and life-like events. Incubi and trolls are usually macabre creatures, and their ecology is often grotesque. I may change the bio to fit a lighter mood if necessary.


Name: Kicsi Mákfej
Nicknames: (None yet)

Gender: Male

Age: 22

Height: 8’8”

Weight: 311 lbs

Hair: Dark red/black

Eyes: Dark orange/red

Species: Troll/Incubus

Racial Traits: From mixed blood he’s acquired lesser strengths and weaknesses of both species. As a troll he has the natural brawn and immunity to poisons/disease that stem from their regenerative abilities. Any damage, even a limb being removed, will eventually heal (yes this includes the head and other ‘vital’ organs). However, it is slower than most trolls and still requires the same energy from his body to do so. Generally a troll’s regenerative ability is altogether stopped by fire, their weakness, but his demonic blood helps to overcome this slightly. Fire will still, however, slow his regenerative process to a crawl. This comes, through a high-protein diet (generally flesh) that requires almost constant feeding.
He hasn’t tapped into hardly any Incubus ‘powers,’ if they even exist, but he generally is smarter and more level-headed than most of his race. He does know he can consume the soul of a living being through sexual contact (i.e. deep kissing, sex, etc.) and use it to temporarily spike his other natural talents/traits. His mind is extremely resistant to control, probing, or charms of any sort, though not as full-proof as a pure incubus’s would be. He can also use the sexual fluid of other living beings as sustenance (its usually protein). Both of his races can see with little light, so he can see perfectly fine at night.

Talents: Coming from a tribe of creatures with ‘lesser’ intelligence he is proud to say he can read. Obviously he is combat-trained. He knows a good deal about the wilderness and can track well enough. He enjoys ‘free-running’ though hasn’t often done so in an urban environment. He’s good at most sports though he hasn’t played them much. Not a bad singer, he has pretty attuned hearing.

Hindrances: He has a high-protein diet that requires him eating a fourth of his weight in protein-high foods (though sexual fluids seem to sustain him better than a meal) and more than that if he’s been regenerating often. Fire slows his regenerative abilities to a crawl. He’s still not the brightest guy on the block, and is easy to confuse or anger him despite his ‘iron-clad’ mind. Also, he’s a sexual deviant that psychologically craves physical attention that is only satiated by sexual means or brutal force as an outlet.

Likes: Flesh(eating), sex, beautiful creatures/beings, combat, sports, hunting/tracking, demonic magic, and occasional reading

Dislikes: Bitter foodstuffs, cuddling/pillow-talk, dominance struggles, overly complicated/complex things or thinking, feeling stupid/dumb, bigotry, and being denied (usually sexually)

History: Kicsi’s father, Tág Mákfej, was an aspiring ‘witchdoctor’ for his tribe. In attempts to gain control of the clan as chief he planned to summon a demon that would kill or sabotage the current chief. However, he unintentionally summoned a succubus that could do little for his plan. Out of frustration he raped the restrained demon and banished her shortly after brutalizing her. Months later, Kicsi was found in his tent.
His father, now chief, raised Kicsi as a son he was ashamed or afraid of. The boy was obviously more intelligent than most of the clan. He grew up to blend in as well as he could and became strong and smart, but his father never taught him the ways of magic or how to lead. Afraid that Kicsi might overthrow him one day or learn of his origins, Tág banished his son from the tribe.
Kicsi used his father’s tribal title as a surname while spending the last two years in and out of ‘civilization.’ The only way to return to his tribe is to gain approval of the chief or to defeat him in battle, so he’s hoping to join the academy and learn magic or some way to defeat his father. However, he has been enjoying some of civilization’s comforts…

Personality: He’s generally quieter in new environments, observing how people act and what they accept before reacting accordingly. Depending on the people he may be talkative, though he usually enters conversations to gain something, especially if it is of great interest to him. He is defensive when ‘attacked,’ even if done as a joke, and doesn’t take kindly to humor directed at him that isn’t positive. He blows up easily, usually resorting to physical retaliation. Though he hates the idea of bigotry he accepts it when he must. He may defend or help another if he thinks it’ll improve his chances to sleep with them or gain their favor. In the same sense, he will join in on pranks if he can gain something from it. However, if there is no profit, he will have no part in it. He loves all physical activity, especially sexual kinds, and will never turn down advances from ‘people’ he finds attractive. Sometimes, he’ll even go for the ‘unattractive’ when particularly craving it. He’s also rather curious and competitive.

Other points and facts:

-He’s actually smaller and thinner than most trolls. His head is much smaller and shares hardly any facial characteristics of trolls (i.e. large nose, growths, sunken eyes, massive under-bite), In fact, his surname is ‘head’ and his name means ‘little’
-He would likes sweets but won’t eat them since their rarely full of protein. However, sweet-meats are his favorite!
-If he can get away with it, he’ll eat people (sometimes after unsatisfying sex or battle)
-Knows of his mother, but still refers to himself as a full troll



Formspring to come

Kicsi (c)
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Comments: 57

ComicsBraze [2010-08-30 01:15:07 +0000 UTC]

he is... so big 0-0......... meep.

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Gelmisar In reply to ComicsBraze [2010-09-01 05:57:38 +0000 UTC]

He's also very tall...

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ComicsBraze In reply to Gelmisar [2010-09-02 00:06:49 +0000 UTC]

wow, i like him

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Gelmisar In reply to ComicsBraze [2010-09-02 19:15:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, glad to hear it!

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ComicsBraze In reply to Gelmisar [2010-09-03 02:43:51 +0000 UTC]

you welcome

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Rosli [2010-08-22 07:27:57 +0000 UTC]


H-he's so tall~!
I love him though, he looks so bomb~ And muscley~!
I knew he was a troll right off the bat.
Great character design.

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Gelmisar In reply to Rosli [2010-08-22 20:39:38 +0000 UTC]

Well, trolls are descendant from giants in most fantasy... that and I' about 6'9" (203cm?) myself. XD
Thank you! Glad you like him.
I'm glad you could tell; it took forever sketching the right body without him looking ugly (like trolls usually are).

I found Athie (your gorgon) pretty well-rendered myself! Kinda of an art-nouveau feel to it, and quite a pretty face!

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Rosli In reply to Gelmisar [2010-08-22 21:32:55 +0000 UTC]


Tall people are frightening~! So are trolls, it makes sense~ xD
Haha, but that's wonderful, I love him! -claps-
I tried to make my gorgon look ugly but... it didn't work xD;

Thank you~! c:
Oh really? I love Nouveau styles <33 thank you so much!

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MightyMaki [2010-08-21 18:05:57 +0000 UTC]

Ah he's so lovely~! How would he handle Isabella? She's so much tinier than him! (She's only 5'6")
She'd probably just sit on his shoulder XD

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Gelmisar In reply to MightyMaki [2010-08-21 21:41:43 +0000 UTC]

Haha... that depends what you mean by 'handle'?

Oh yeah, he totally does that for good friends who want a ride. 'Specially if they find it 'sexy.' >u>

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MightyMaki In reply to Gelmisar [2010-08-22 20:51:57 +0000 UTC]

Pfft in any kind of way XD Like, would she be on top?

XD I can totally imagine Izzy just going 'pick me up please!' And then hold her arms like a little kid.

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Gelmisar In reply to MightyMaki [2010-08-22 21:14:42 +0000 UTC]

As a just a friend, he'd treat her as normal for the most part but wouldn't be afraid to try something or just ask when he's 'in the mood' or they're alone.
In bed, well... He'd do whatever she liked; some girls like to feel manhandled -which I'm sure he could still do despite her strength. Or, if she wants to be in control, he'd be down for that as well.
The position is all up to her fancy; he could even just pick her up while they went at it or something.


Haha... yeah! That'd be unnecessarily cute XD
He'd have to do it even if they were just acquaintances

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MightyMaki In reply to Gelmisar [2010-08-23 01:46:57 +0000 UTC]

She'd probably ask him straight off the bat. But she'd ask him to feed her.
Her current feeder doesn't do a very good job. She actually attacked him and sucked
a bit of his soul out(bad idea apparently). She totally submissive unless she activates her eyes,
and she usually never does that unless it's an unwilling
person. And in bed, it's almost never. She usually likes someone much stronger than her so Kicsi is perfect!
XD She'd just have to figure out some way
to move cause she's not used to someone so big. Not that she can't handle it.

Probably after making the 'huge' comment, she'd be like "Can you feed me?"

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Gelmisar In reply to MightyMaki [2010-08-23 04:34:54 +0000 UTC]

That kinda sucks XD
I don't think he'd be unwilling unless there were REALLY special circumstances or he was wary of her taking his soul.
It wouldn't be a matter of needing to 'handle it' anyway, because of his latent incubi powers it 'fits' perfectly to whomever he's with. otherwise, he'd have a fat chance in hell getting anyone in bed with an elephant penis.

If he didn't know she was a succubus, he'd probably be confused. Otherwise he'd either be wary of her eating his soul or immediately offer to take her somewhere.

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MightyMaki In reply to Gelmisar [2010-08-23 22:46:00 +0000 UTC]

Well she can choice her way of feeding.
She can either eat souls or have sex. And
8 out of 10 times she'd rather have sex cause
one it doesn't kill/harm anyone(usually XD) and
plus it feels better. XD Lol Izzy has that same ability.
Cause I'm pretty sure no guy wants to do a girl who's been
smashed by X number of guys. XD

Lol I can just imagine his confusion. If she saw that,
she'd prolly ask the second question which is something
along the lines of 'Are you free right now?'

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Gelmisar In reply to MightyMaki [2010-08-24 01:57:42 +0000 UTC]

Of course, of course... it sounds like a good enough reason. In a way, they can both feed each other, I guess. No need to needlessly kill! (though Kicsi totally finds it fun sometimes)
Might just get bored of each other; I assume incubi/succubi do or that's all they'd go after.

And then he'd immediately get it, but either be careful not to be controlled or... if he found her 'harmless' enough he'd just go with it without question. FUN TIMES TO BE HAD!

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flowers1011 [2010-08-19 03:13:24 +0000 UTC]

Haha wow :'D he is so tall! I love it xD

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Gelmisar In reply to flowers1011 [2010-08-19 06:51:41 +0000 UTC]

Yep! Thanks. X3

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Inx9119 [2010-08-18 23:36:05 +0000 UTC]

OMG! Killer muscles!
Love his personality~ ;u;

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Gelmisar In reply to Inx9119 [2010-08-19 00:03:56 +0000 UTC]

I work hard on da' muscles... >u>
Thanks, glad you like him!

Rahu seems pretty awesome himself.
Doesn't EVERYONE secretly want a harem? XD

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Inx9119 In reply to Gelmisar [2010-08-19 00:05:34 +0000 UTC]

It turned out great after all the
hard work~ His super~

Rahu is just a perverted Dragon.
Maybe, I don't know EVERYONE xD

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Gelmisar In reply to Inx9119 [2010-08-19 00:12:57 +0000 UTC]

Of course, he worked hard for those muscles, too.

I liked the meme a lot... XP

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Inx9119 In reply to Gelmisar [2010-08-19 00:25:43 +0000 UTC]

Extra special training~ >;D

Awww, thank you~

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Nyyq [2010-08-18 21:26:24 +0000 UTC]

...I'd say this guy is better than any bishie troll, he is AMAZING. <3
Gaw that musculatureeee~ He reflects the species well (without being like....hard on the eyes that is such a hard balance to strike asf).
One of the more original characters, I'm really rooting for your enrollment! TvT <333

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Gelmisar In reply to Nyyq [2010-08-18 21:51:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! TuT
It was really a challenge making him noticeably a troll yet 'attractive' enough to reflect upon being part incubusm so I'm glad you mentioned that.
Thanks a lot, it's wonderful to hear! ;u;

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JackSquash [2010-08-18 21:14:26 +0000 UTC]

FFFFFF tall, heavy ass mofo. D<




....




I love him.

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Gelmisar In reply to JackSquash [2010-08-18 21:21:20 +0000 UTC]

Haha... Maddrick's no shorty himself.
though still shorter than me AND Kicsi
BUFF GUYS FOR THE WIN!

Thank you!

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JackSquash In reply to Gelmisar [2010-08-18 21:25:05 +0000 UTC]

H-how tall are you?? D8
HO YES!!
Duuuude, Kicsi should join the American Football team. When I actually get off my ass and draw the uniform and shit. xD

You're welcome <3

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Gelmisar In reply to JackSquash [2010-08-18 21:42:36 +0000 UTC]

I'm 6'9" so I tend to make tall characters...

Yeah, he totally will. XD
Linebacker or some shizz...

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JackSquash In reply to Gelmisar [2010-08-18 21:57:51 +0000 UTC]

HOLY.
Dude, I'm like, 5'2" or 5'4". xD (I dunno, my doctors give me different answers so I'm around there.)
You...are a tower.

FUCK YES.
He will destroy the opponents.
...
Who would we play, anyway?

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Gelmisar In reply to JackSquash [2010-08-18 22:17:05 +0000 UTC]

Haha! I get that a lot.


... I have no idea,
Christmas academy?

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JackSquash In reply to Gelmisar [2010-08-18 22:19:06 +0000 UTC]

PICS OR IT DIDN'T HAPPEN.


....It might just work.

Well, are there any other 'academy' groups going on?

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Gelmisar In reply to JackSquash [2010-08-18 22:45:34 +0000 UTC]

Wait, what... pics? Of my tallness? >u>

Yeah, plenty, I'm sure. In fact, I think there used to be another halloween academy long before this one. I'm also in two other academies; AoH & HHA.

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JackSquash In reply to Gelmisar [2010-08-18 22:51:55 +0000 UTC]

Yes? xD

Well then, maybe after everyone gets accepted and stuff we can talk to the admins and people about a crossover game. o 3o
...lol, it'd be difficult though.

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Gelmisar In reply to JackSquash [2010-08-18 23:04:14 +0000 UTC]

Aight. My Vash cosplay ... that chick is about 5'6"-5'8" AND in heels
...aaaand Kitty closeup

I'm actually a mod for the Heave-Hell Academy
It'd probably easiest with another made-up school for us to compete with or an affiliated group.

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JackSquash In reply to Gelmisar [2010-08-18 23:33:01 +0000 UTC]


You are a god. A god of height. And Vash cosplay.

That'd work.
Now we just gotta convince the other school to form a football team. xD

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Gelmisar In reply to JackSquash [2010-08-18 23:59:21 +0000 UTC]

Haha.. thanks. At AX every year. XD

I dunno if there're enough jock in most any other groups. People love scrawny pretty-boys better. XP

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JackSquash In reply to Gelmisar [2010-08-19 01:12:48 +0000 UTC]

I've never been to a large con before. OTL
I need to start saving for CONvergence, Detour, and Anime Iowa. D: (They're the closest to me.)

xD
All the better for us!

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PapaSamOLD [2010-08-18 19:31:55 +0000 UTC]

Dude he's amazing!!

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Gelmisar In reply to PapaSamOLD [2010-08-18 21:08:47 +0000 UTC]

Your face is amazing!
...<3

Thank you! ;u;

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PapaSamOLD In reply to Gelmisar [2010-08-18 21:09:16 +0000 UTC]

>u< And I love his information too it's so realistic!

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Gelmisar In reply to PapaSamOLD [2010-08-18 21:14:08 +0000 UTC]

You think so?
I fear maybe too realistic for 'pg-13'

Glad you like him! X3

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PapaSamOLD In reply to Gelmisar [2010-08-18 21:24:18 +0000 UTC]

LOL no way, it def. is within the limits. You get the point across without being so vulgar~

Pretty beings you say >u> -strokes Cornelius- LOLJK

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Gelmisar In reply to PapaSamOLD [2010-08-18 21:41:03 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I didn't read most of the other characters, but I figured it'd be more of a 'teen' environment like most groups.

Oh yeah, totally. He's attracted to beauty, not gender. I purposefully never said girl or guy for a reason... >w>

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PapaSamOLD In reply to Gelmisar [2010-08-18 21:48:26 +0000 UTC]

OBBY >U>!
Lololol I hope you get in ;u; I hope WE get in -high fi-...

uh...-gives your stomach a high five- >n>

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Gelmisar In reply to PapaSamOLD [2010-08-18 21:58:09 +0000 UTC]

...yeah.
-flexes stomach for high-five-

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PapaSamOLD In reply to Gelmisar [2010-08-18 22:01:23 +0000 UTC]

LOL

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Cris-Gee [2010-08-18 17:09:30 +0000 UTC]

/IS A LITTLE MORE SCARED OF SEX NOW
8D
As if I wasn't already scared of it >w>

I like him man. Always so original you are. |D<3333

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Gelmisar In reply to Cris-Gee [2010-08-18 18:13:03 +0000 UTC]

YOU SHOULD BE. D:<
Bah, it's fine when appropriately performed

Thanks, glad you think he's 'original' XD

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Cris-Gee In reply to Gelmisar [2010-08-18 18:17:28 +0000 UTC]

ROFL I wouldn't know 8D
/VIRGINNNN

FFFFF Yw! OUO
In a good way, >w>

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