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Princessvegata [2012-06-29 06:38:05 +0000 UTC]
I did a similar Fanfic, who mainly tells the events during the Kyuubi attack and Narutos Birth. But the ending is different than in the original plot.
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Kaonashi-Nanashi [2012-06-23 03:06:17 +0000 UTC]
Minako would be closer to Minato. Just saying.
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DoomMarine58 [2011-06-11 19:26:02 +0000 UTC]
The part with Mitsuko sitting next to him gave me a tooth-ache from the sweetness.
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PritzPritz [2011-05-29 22:42:14 +0000 UTC]
O_o Dude. The young and charmingly hot-blooded Kushina turned into an angry emo when she 63'd. XD Damn. But this is probably what would happen if Kishimoto had switched her gender. He seems to care more about how men feel - Kushina was an easy nut to crack, being female in Kishi's male-dominated world. All she needed to erase all her pain was for the decidedly 2D, no-personality Minato to screw her and knock her up. After all; bearing children is all a woman needs to calm her down. ;]
This is a sweet story from you, Kio! I love the comic format!
Would love to see M-Kushina grown and interacting kindly that one time with his daughter, even if the whole 'meeting dead parents' thing was painfully lame to me. <3 M-Kushina really has potential to be an awesome fella!
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PritzPritz In reply to Gemkio [2011-06-02 20:50:43 +0000 UTC]
I'm very glad it did! It's come out so lovely and sweet~!
Oooh, that sounds really interesting... X3 am I allowed 'spoilers' or must I wait until a comic/story comes of it? ;D
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CaellachTigerEye In reply to Gemkio [2012-12-13 05:05:34 +0000 UTC]
... You made Kuuya the 4th Hokage instead of Mitsuko, didn't you?
If I'm correct, then I'm... not sure how to feel about that one, really. Part of me is seriously thinking it's a kind of sexist development, incidentally flipping them but the STILL making the male end in the relationship the one who becomes Hokage.
And noo, I will NOT accept the hiding of the relationship (and that the Hokage was to have a child at ALL) as an excuse - it could EASILY be claimed that Mitsuko's child still died that night. I mean, given how Nariko looks, it's already baffling enough that nobody seemed to connect the dots before being outright told by those who knew. Surely you don't need to demote F-Minato just to use M-Kushina as a smokescreen?
If I'm wrong about this, I apologise. If not... well, to be candid I'm more that a little angry about it.
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hey54321 [2011-05-28 17:32:22 +0000 UTC]
this is so sad but yet so cute at the same time
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fizzaddict [2011-05-28 13:07:01 +0000 UTC]
Sooooo cute! I love these two so much!
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DarkLunarangel [2011-05-28 03:22:30 +0000 UTC]
Aww...Mitsuko's so cute when she's blushy but it's so sad when she's sad. Poor angsty little Kuuya. I look forward to him seeing that it's not pity. Still, even with his pain...this is really good!
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Bai-Bai!
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DarkLunarangel In reply to Gemkio [2011-05-29 12:11:15 +0000 UTC]
But...but at least it will have a happy ending. It will just take a lot of hard work and tears.
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Bai-Bai!
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RasenMeteor [2011-05-28 00:14:49 +0000 UTC]
Awesome and funny!!!!!!!!!! I wait for the 2nd part!!!!
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AirSpiritOfLight [2011-05-27 22:06:31 +0000 UTC]
Aww...Just...aw.... <3
plus a sad aw, but still..
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AirSpiritOfLight In reply to Gemkio [2011-05-28 03:01:15 +0000 UTC]
.....Aw... xDDD;;; That's okay! Sad stuff is fine too xD
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HavingMercy [2011-05-27 21:29:33 +0000 UTC]
Aw, TT^TT.
Love the story. Can't help but feel sad by it though...
Just a little question, if mitsuko want's to be the first female hokage does that mean you didn't gb'ed the other three hokages?
Can't wait to read the rest of the story. ^_^
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t11baf [2011-05-27 21:22:57 +0000 UTC]
Kuuya-Kun!D< Dun' be mean to sweet little Mitsuko! She just wants to be your friend,and she's doing an adorable little buzzy in love face,and you cuss her and shove her to the side like trash?Well,if Kio-Chan lets me,I will have the right mind to smack you! You seem a lot like your daughter's gb counterpart,only more-so tempered,less on the mischief. But,this is nice,and I look for more!
And I see Kuuya's little 'I love you' face,and I can really relate,but great job!
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t11baf In reply to Gemkio [2011-05-28 02:50:59 +0000 UTC]
I know,I mean,she-she's a beautiful little sweetheart
(Nice,nice. Yep,like father like daughter,or that's it for my dad and I. My 'mother' let me nearly die in a house fire at a year old,but she saved her cat,leaving my grandmother,my dad's mother to save me. Had she not,I couldn't tell you this now. I've been with Daddy since. 15,youngest of 6,I am. But I'm fine,mainly C
I could really consider us at a decent friendship,you're such a sweet and awesome person from what I can tell.
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