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Description Hellooo~ I'm the Nostalgia Potiti Critic. I remember it, because you all can't! You know, there was a time when I was sadistically into making platoons, and give Keronians hells of lives. The perfect example of that is the Jigogo Platoon. This rogue team of evil-doers consists of 5 members, as usual, namely:

-Jigogo, the hellish invader (Jigo = "Hell" in Japanese); he was abused by insane parents, who secretly tortured him in the basement of their house. He has literally seen and experienced hell. When they were sloppy in tying the ropes, he escaped and murdered them brutally, having been completely turned insane. He escaped his house, and joined the military, having been physically approved since his durability has been proven. But due to sloppiness in the mental check, it was unknown to everyone he was insane. Because this monster was not just insane; he was clever. And he used this sick cleverness to be subtle in military operations, but be a brutal fucking monster when he marched into battle. When it was revealed he was this mad, he was fired and sent to an institution, from which he escaped. He stole the devision of super soldiers and became a rogue platoon of mad invaders.

-Bozozo, the tailed murderer (Bozo = Dutch slang for "angry guy"); he has had anger management issues from birth. He could go completely crazy in anger, and was emotionally completely unstable, also because of abusive and sick parents. His tail never withdrew, because he was part of a Keronian subspecies that doesn't lose the tail, but strengthens it to make it a third arm. He jabbed a blade in it, and used it to become very vicious in killing. He became part of a devision of secret weapons, engineered super soldiers with extreme powers. His armor is unbreakable, and has extremely sharp edges. Don't cross blades with this guy; he'll rip you apart. LITERALLY. He joined Jigogo when the latter intruded the base and took him and his super soldier friends with him for back-up. He wanted to relieve some of his anger and joining the psychopathic invader could quench his blood lust...

-Izuzu, the frozen killer (Izu = a weird way of saying "ice"); he was born mentally unstable, and had a very cold body temperature, leading to severe physical health problems. The doctors had no idea what to do, and recommended the hospital, where also, the medics had no idea what to do with him. But one day, a scientist named Zarere came along and decided to take care of the boy with the rare disease. But unbeknownst to the parents, Zarere was a military scientist, and an insane one at that. He "took care" of Izuzu, meaning he engineered his body to adjust to the body temperature. That the boy survived this long with the disease was already a miracle, so him surviving this operation was even more miraculous. Izuzu got keriumhexahydrate (Keronian ice) claws and boots; his eyes were replaced with keriumhexahydrate crystals, and his entire body got a surface temperature of below zero, yet his body remained completely alive. Zarere was proud of his experiment, even though Izuzu completely lost his sanity. Both of them joined Jigogo when he invaded the base to get them out and cause trouble. Since then, Zarere takes care of Izuzu.

-Zarere, the evil scientist/hacker; from childhood, he had a fascination for science and computer technology. Through puberty and adulthood, he became a very dangerous hacker and computer genius, though he also had a fascination for body metabolism. He became a scientist and hacker. When Jigogo invaded the base, he joined Jigogo, even though he himself wasn't a super soldier. But a techno-recon expert was always useful... He takes care of Izuzu.

-Piruru, the scarred assassin; a crazed assassin and mad killer. He turned out to be taller than the average Keronian due to a disturbance in his growth hormone production. He became insanely sadistic and vengeful after he lost his eye during a battle. His hobby is systematically opening another's body and give them the worst pain imaginable. He joined Jigogo as part of his platoon.

The quality per Keronian differs this time around. For example, Jigogo looks pretty sweet, while Piruru's proportions are ridiculous. He looks much taller than the others, and Izuzu's head is above average. The only one who looks closest to a real Keronian is Zarere. He's the only one on whom one pixel lines were used to draw him. The others all have lines of 2 pixels, and Piruru even has 3-pixeled lines. Their backstories are a bit sloppy to my opinion because I just made them up... So, if anything should be edited, please tell me, so the public has a voice in my creations as well c: I'm the Nostalgia Potiti Critic! I remember it, cuz you all can't!

General Potiti, OUT! XD
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Comments: 35

Black-Sweater [2019-05-08 04:33:29 +0000 UTC]

bro you kinda forgot to sort this pic into the keronian folders XD
i kept forgeting where it's at XD

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GeneralPotiti In reply to Black-Sweater [2019-05-08 12:09:00 +0000 UTC]

WHOOPS XD Oh well it's an old drawing anyway -3- But thanks for pointing it out

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Black-Sweater In reply to GeneralPotiti [2019-05-08 12:37:01 +0000 UTC]

SORT it god damn it my OCD is killing meeee! XD

Just. SORT. IT! (doing the "JUST. DO IT" voice )

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GeneralPotiti In reply to Black-Sweater [2019-05-08 16:25:18 +0000 UTC]

PFff xD Done XD

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Black-Sweater In reply to GeneralPotiti [2019-05-08 18:07:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank youu so much, bro = v =

sorry i couldn't help it XD 

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GeneralPotiti In reply to Black-Sweater [2019-05-08 21:08:01 +0000 UTC]

Haha XD Nah u right, it needed sorting lol

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Black-Sweater In reply to GeneralPotiti [2019-05-09 06:08:42 +0000 UTC]

Gotta be on top o' that gallery maan, before it turns into an after noon of crying and sorting thru a pile o' crap (me) XD

glad it helped XD

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GeneralPotiti In reply to Black-Sweater [2019-05-09 11:58:35 +0000 UTC]

Pfff xD

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Black-Sweater In reply to GeneralPotiti [2019-05-09 14:14:05 +0000 UTC]

lol XP

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Black-Sweater [2015-07-15 23:46:59 +0000 UTC]

Oh well DANG...that's one dangerous looking crew alright é A è

even i'm scared X3
SUPER COOL WORK BRO BRO XD

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GeneralPotiti In reply to Black-Sweater [2015-07-23 23:44:07 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, they're remorseless XD Probably one of my more darker platoons ._. Though my Zanunu platoon may be even worse... XD That's a team of literally ONLY assassins. I'll post them later ^^

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Black-Sweater In reply to GeneralPotiti [2015-07-24 05:02:55 +0000 UTC]

I wouldn't blame em'...heck four of them including the leader has mental illness
it's only natural....^ 3 ^
But ey!...at least we know Keron is finally experimenting super soldiers X3

Cool~...since you have so many i have trouble remembering = v ="

I also forget the platoon In which Vasisi Killed Ziruru
Why don't you draw them ?
Since they're Potiti's main Enemy right?

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GeneralPotiti In reply to Black-Sweater [2015-07-24 13:04:49 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, true XD

Haha XD I like you try to remember them at all... :3

Hmmm... Good one! Btw, it's Zigugu XD Yeah, I drew them already, but I don't have Zigugu on there yet. The Chuii version of the Ufofo platoon has Zigugu, killed by Vasisi, and in the Shogun version of them, Jiruru has taken his place. Zeruru despises Jiruru, because Jiruru is kind of a wuss, and Zeruru finds it despicable of Ufofo he replaced Zeruru's best friend with such a coward... But Jiruru is electrokinetic, so Ufofo sees potential... Zeruru and Jiruru will never get along though...

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Black-Sweater In reply to GeneralPotiti [2015-07-24 13:21:47 +0000 UTC]

A...are you mad?....i'm so sorry...there's just so many é ~ è"

OMG BOOYA!
Holly cripes bro It would be so COOL either way to see them

I can't wait to see Potiti's rivals XD
Also i would love to see both! Jiruru and Zigugu
oh and zeruru too!<3
And Ufofo
HECK i wanna see them all!

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GeneralPotiti In reply to Black-Sweater [2015-07-24 14:41:19 +0000 UTC]

Of course I'm not mad, why would I be mad? XD You awesome

All right then, I'll get right to it I could give you a top ten of his biggest rivals though, wanna see? XD

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Black-Sweater In reply to GeneralPotiti [2015-07-24 14:57:48 +0000 UTC]

awww...thanks XD

OH!..can i?...WOOH!...SURE THING BRO SHOW MEEEH! XD

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GeneralPotiti In reply to Black-Sweater [2015-07-25 01:45:58 +0000 UTC]

X3

Okay

Nr. 10: Zaxaros
A Kolopsian colonist, Zaxaros is the commander of a large fleet of warships which scours the galaxy for habitable planets and add them to their territory as their own. Zaxaros, however, is never satisfied with the worlds he conquers, so he then either blows them up, or lets the weakest Kolopsians live there, ready to be sacrificed for resisting forces. He is known to be one of the most ruthless invaders in the galaxy.

Nr. 9: Gasusu
A Keronian made of clouds, Gasusu is an entity formed from gas, which gathered water from Pekopon's skies after being brought there by platoon members Koruru, a mechanical technician, Gorara, the pissed off female, Xororo, a cybernetic assassin, and Chyowowo, a short-tempered kick boxer. Gasusu formed and now terrorizes the Potiti Platoon and tries to take over Pekopon.

Nr. 8: The Corps. Leader Platoon
This unlikely team of monstrous Keronian Crime Lords consists of Taroro, the digitalized technology entity, Tarere, the four-tailed assassin, Nekeke, the puppeteer, Onini, the Keronian Devil, Tikoko, the trick spirit and Nubibi, the elephant-like Keronian. The four of them have teamed up with Kitata to take Potiti's crown and take over Keron, and later Pekopon as well, once power is seized.

Nr. 7: Zanunu
Zanunu is the past leader of the Special Military Assassin Division X-2, and former commander of Batoto, Potiti's closest friend. Now that he got fired from that job, he gathered his own merry band of assassins, namely Gyoruru, Zanunu's best friend and assassin with two metal gloves with beamsaber blades on the fingertips, Mururu, the mindless serial killer, Utete, the technology-obsessed and crazed killer, Zonana, the killer-whale-shaped Keronian, Chikaka, the Keronian with barely an organic body left and Asasa, the natural born assassin.

Nr. 6: Roku Ichidi (61-D)
One of the most feared invaders in the galaxy, Roku's way of invading is an infamous one. He always leaves his 61-D riddle with governments, and by the time they figure it out, Roku strikes and eradicates all of the population with his immense power and makes the planet his domain. He is known as the most merciless and heartless invaders in the galaxy, and is wanted all throughout the universe. His signs of his attack are always frightening for the people, so he gained a most fearsome reputation.

Nr. 5: Shiroro
Ufofo's older brother, Shiroro is a very powerful and evil invader who wants nothing but conquest and death. He leads his own army of diverse species of soldiers, going from planet to planet, taking over and eradicating armies. But a few planets have managed to survive his ruthless invasions, and that's how his frightening tales have come to be.

Nr. 4: Vengalza
A long time ago, the Volo was one of the most dangerous viruses in the galaxy. After ages of fighting, they managed to get the infected women to a distant meteor, which, unbeknownst to the aliens, was developing to become a planet. Now, the Volo have evolved its own society and infrastructure, a.k.a. one palace, and a large fleet of ships. Vengalza is the leader of this civilization, and also the Almother of the Volo species. She merely has to kiss a male to get "pregnant" of Volo offspring, which she now aims to do with Potiti...

Nr. 3: Ufofo
Yet another rogue platoon leader, Ufofo is the commander of the Ufofo Platoon, which consists of Tsababa, the armored technician, Zeruru, a ninja, Jiruru, an elektrokinetic rookie and Piroro, the often imbecilic scientist. The team is yet another platoon of ruthless invaders and tries to take over as many planets as possible to demonstrate their power, even though they almost never succeed, Ufofo is still almost impossible to beat in direct combat.

Nr. 2: Spidoid
A mechanical terrorist, Spidoid is a robot with an extreme superiority complex. His goal is to exterminate life in the universe and spread either fear or forced respect for mechanicals across the galaxy. He spares the ones that do understand mechanicals longer than the ones that don't, and has been dubbed one of the greatest threats to life itself in the galaxy, for his wide variety of weapons, extremely high intelligence and strategic skills, ability to mass-produce himself and being the one that truly struck fear in the heart of Potiti.

Nr. 1: Kitata
The mad trickster and master of bending reality, this paranormal wizard can twist the perception of reality with his trick cane, from which the trick zone can be unleashed, a zone where reality and perception are swirled upside down and dimensions don't make sense anymore, absolute torture for anyone with a weak stomach or sanity. His goal is to snatch the Poti-crown and take over Keron, all out of revenge because Potiti once got him arrested in a fight where only Potiti survived.

How 'bout that?!

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Black-Sweater In reply to GeneralPotiti [2015-07-25 02:53:45 +0000 UTC]

Holly daaayuum~...i wonder what if the clown fought with Kitata or something ahaha XD

That's was AMAZING....you have so many deadly villains for Potiti
poor guy XD

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GeneralPotiti In reply to Black-Sweater [2015-07-25 16:27:47 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, that's what I plan to make happen; two rapists of logic facing off... EPIC AND WEIRD XD Or they could get along... the chances of which are higher XD

Thanks Yeah XD But he'll be fine He's got tha PLATOON >: D

Corporal Second Class Bukiki - Greatest aim on Keron, expert in weaponry and battle, indispensable part of the platoon in combat
Lance Corporal First Class Batoto - Greatest battler on Keron, master of every known martial arts in the galaxy, expert in stealth and assassination
Private Third Class Roveve - Though a rookie, an expert combatant in martial arts, one of the tanks of the platoon with her Roveve Impact move (spewing fire) or Roveve Fire Fang move (spewing 4 fire blasts at once from her collars)
Professor Ikuku - Smartest man on Keron, expert in technology and strategy, one of the most flexible brains in the galaxy
Chief Medic Sheila - Only Pekoponian in the entire Keron military, expert in beamsaber combat under tutelage of Batoto, love interest of Potiti

These five dunces always got mah back! Glad you like mah bad guys XD

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Black-Sweater In reply to GeneralPotiti [2015-07-25 17:17:57 +0000 UTC]

they're still quite unpredictable though...XD
who knows what'll happen XD

Wait huh?....that's the original platoon isn't it.....the first one XD

so where are the current guys at?
and what happened to the old guys to have a new platoon for?

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GeneralPotiti In reply to Black-Sweater [2015-07-26 01:51:45 +0000 UTC]

True, true, true... Time will tell... XD

The second one, actually c: But yeah, the first one I MADE XD

Because Potiti got promoted to General for destroying Spidoid, he had the honor of getting a new platoon. He saw his old friends Bukiki and Batoto had assigned themselves, and he more than welcomed them in. But... only 5 could be placed... Ikuku was more than happy to join, so he got in. Bukiki and Batoto did as well. Shorara decided to leave the military to return to her wife (she's gay cx) and spend her life there, having enough of all the deadly adventures. Weatherbird decided to return to his home world as well, to be the superhero he was there once more. Sqeak got promoted and was assigned to another platoon. Orion... more complicated... :/

Spidoid, during the final battle, had prepared a doomsday weapon that would turn all the robots in the universe to his cause, having revealed all the fortresses he had placed on various planets are actually antennas, filled to the brim with death traps and weapons to defend themselves. Once activated, it would reprogram every single mechanical in the universe and turn them against the organics, exterminating life much faster that way. Potiti, however, was there with the platoon to stop it. Orion, unfortunately, got reprogrammed briefly as well and sided with Spidoid. After getting the waves out of Orion's head, they went to destroy the Original. They succeeded (kinda, the Original replaced himself mid-battle), and turned the waves off, turning the robots back into the drones they were. However, the impression was made that robots are evil, raising a very controversial question; are robots allowed in the military? Unfortunately, the answer was no. And Ikuku was forced to shut down his own son... For 4 and a half Keronian years straight, Orion was sleeping, just like Rigel, his brother. Ship, being an intelligent AI, was also taken away. All Potiti's mechanical friends had to be turned off... So, for a long time, robots were banned from the army. A year later, however, the controversy faded, and robots were allowed again, even giving Potiti a large army of Kimumu- and IAA-droids. Ikuku, however, never thought of Orion again, since, coldly enough, he forgot... It never crossed his mind to activate Orion again. Orion just laid in a box in the basement of Potiti's new, silent ship...

Yeah, kind of a depressing ending :/

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Black-Sweater In reply to GeneralPotiti [2015-07-26 02:43:11 +0000 UTC]

Oooooh i see

very nice

very nice indeed...

Damn Ikuku *Face palm so hard*...
pfff talk about a bond between father and son..ahahha

and even worse now that potiti also forgot...and he got a brand new army...
that's cold XD

there should be a story of Orion waking up acidentally and was heart broken when he relized he was forgoten and turns to the bad guy....buut i dunno...that's what Vasisi would've done if he was forgoten n shit..(Which will never happen)

i mean....they litterally proved to him that spidoid's theory was right...and all those things about his friendship...his company was not important...and easily forgetable,and he  was just a tool to them...

Including his great leader was supposed to be the most divine of them all...Potiti the Prince...and King...that must hurt alot....

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GeneralPotiti In reply to Black-Sweater [2015-07-26 19:47:13 +0000 UTC]

The military was also strictly against it, but the public was extremely cautious of robots now. The public's support is extremely important to them military, so the pressure was too much for them to bare...

Orion would never turn to the villains... He would indeed be heart-broken, but I don't think it will ever happen; Orion slept a long time non-stop...

Not to the military. But to the public... And in some perspective, won't robots always be seen that way..? I mean, they are inorganic tools that can move, but they aren't clinically alive. Anything dead or lifeless is a tool... :/

And yeah, Ikuku really fucked up there... But his duties were just that more important... With the mechanical threat out of the way, the invader threat arose; countless alien colonists trying to take over planets and turn them to their cause... It's just the way of life. Sentients are war-hungry creatures...

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Black-Sweater In reply to GeneralPotiti [2015-07-27 04:47:48 +0000 UTC]

Damn...that's one Harsh Perspective.....it means that Spidoid is right when he wanted them to rise up...
If Orion has some kind common sense he would have known that.....he may be super powerfull...but still...he's quite young...and i doubt the fact that being forgotten by his Leader and more so father would not upset him....

Invader or not....it's his fucking son we're talking about here....Ikuku must be kinda old to forget something as important as that......He's a scientist isn't he....aren't scientists supposed to be Much Smarter?..

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GeneralPotiti In reply to Black-Sweater [2015-07-27 13:31:34 +0000 UTC]

He is. No matter how you look at it, Spidoid had justified reasons, but wrong methods. Robots just are seen as tools, no matter how intelligent they are programmed...

Of course it would upset him deep inside, but Orion's too much of a badass to show it. He just wants to serve me. That's his programming. Or his father. Yes, Ikuku is pretty old in the Shogun timeline XD He also grows a bit more forgetful. His mental health slowly deteriorates over time, and he hates it...

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Black-Sweater In reply to GeneralPotiti [2015-07-27 17:32:40 +0000 UTC]

you know something's bad when the Villain's Justified...god damn...good thing Cheche's half organic XP

Still...wow...that's pretty deep there...
Well..poor Orion and Ikuku then...
but still...that's just in the fulture right?...
at the moment everyone is still here?

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GeneralPotiti In reply to Black-Sweater [2015-07-27 20:21:53 +0000 UTC]

Exactly. Half a tool... :/ Maybe not to friends, of course friends see him as much more, but strangers would just see him as a machine that obeys the organics... We have to face it :/

As long as Potiti is a Chuii, Orion's active When Potiti's a Shogun, Orion sleeps...

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Black-Sweater In reply to GeneralPotiti [2015-07-27 23:45:42 +0000 UTC]

Alrighty...i'll keep it in mind
Good thing he doesn't care about those things.......it gives him more chances to suprize the enemy XP

In Vasisi platoon  RP universe Potiti's still a Chuii...Lieutenant X3
so that's quite a relief XD
a sad glymsp into the fulture
Awwww

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GeneralPotiti In reply to Black-Sweater [2015-12-02 02:33:09 +0000 UTC]

Yup cx

Yeah c: And yeah, it's sad what's gonna happen to Orion... I know I'm gonna cry like a little bitch as soon as I write that... ;w;

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Black-Sweater In reply to GeneralPotiti [2015-12-02 05:24:52 +0000 UTC]

i'm sure he'll show them all one day....hmpf! è 3 é

Orion's not like other robots...he's a MAN at heart....i'm sure he'll be fine...he can handle everything thrown at him è 3 é
he ish Strong!..and so are you!....don't be weak..it'll make Orion sad è 3 é

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Pompomlolz [2015-07-04 19:31:00 +0000 UTC]

I love how P stands xD

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GeneralPotiti In reply to Pompomlolz [2015-07-05 10:13:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks..? XD

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Pompomlolz In reply to GeneralPotiti [2015-07-05 14:36:21 +0000 UTC]

What about the request I told chu to do x3

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GeneralPotiti In reply to Pompomlolz [2015-12-02 02:43:24 +0000 UTC]

That never came...  0-0

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Pompomlolz In reply to GeneralPotiti [2015-12-02 20:08:37 +0000 UTC]

I can seeeee

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