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xlntwtch [2013-07-06 10:39:00 +0000 UTC]
I used your title for a title poem here- [link] -and linked it back to you. Thanks!
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Story-of-a-Mind [2013-05-31 17:37:11 +0000 UTC]
This wonderful story was about several different things to me. First there was the bird, that wanted to be grabbed, maybe also wants to be read, reminding me of the way a silent person, wants to be found and listened to. The way it flies into the houses made me think of what kind of thoughts might fly to us if we openened our internal windows to others just wide enough? Would we also take the time to admire their thoughts like the tiny bird? And the word about whose words had made the bird made me think about how god in the bible is reffered to as "the word". So the question could also be broadenend into "who created this world." But coming back to the silent person thing it could also mean: who is this person that said/ wrote this beautiful words.
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leyghan [2013-05-31 01:51:28 +0000 UTC]
To echo what everyone else has said this is amazing. Original, well written and thought provoking. Congrats on the DLD!
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Bark [2013-05-29 09:31:54 +0000 UTC]
Congratulations on the DLD!
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Meggie272 [2013-05-29 07:54:09 +0000 UTC]
This is impressive!
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QueenieNirvana [2013-04-22 19:26:09 +0000 UTC]
the imagery on this is amazing. Ending was quite well-done
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Ike9899 [2013-04-17 15:22:42 +0000 UTC]
well then... at first, it seemed real enough, then it took an interesting turn. Completely not expecting that...
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IllustratedJai [2013-04-17 05:41:36 +0000 UTC]
I don't know what it's about but I know it put a very specific image in my mind~ Partially because I know you and your room, even tho' I'm almost sure the narrator isn't you.
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