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Eternal-Shadow-S [2018-11-16 04:08:11 +0000 UTC]
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It's a fairly decent image. The ones that really stand out well are the faces, as they seem to have the most focus and structure on. The shading on the faces really shows the amount of depth and dimension on them, definitely giving the feel that you could see around them if you tried. Expressions are also fairly good, and the coloring themselves reminds me a whole lot like it were made for perhaps a nice children's book. So I guess that ought to count as a good thing.
Now, with that said, there are areas that can be improved upon. The body of the orc doesn't seem to have much dimension as the face, or the female character. The muscles around his body seem kinda flat, as if they were just printed on. I think this can be fixed if you play around with the shape a bit of the abs and breasts. Don't just keep them as boxes, but trying making the angles a bit more slanted and such. The arms themselves, also look a bit too thin, especially for someone with the kind of bulking figure. I'd suggest making them a little thicker.
Lastly, Ysma's arms are a little too long. From the looks of it, it seems like her elbows can reach her hips. If you designed her to have really long arms I suppose it would be fine. However, if that wasn't the intention, I suggest making them shorter.
Overall, it's a decent pic that just needs some improvements with anatomy. It doesn't have to be super realistic or spot on, but some parts ought to be looked at, to make it look much better. Still, good job on this.
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Zack175 [2018-11-11 21:03:07 +0000 UTC]
This is good piece, I like the subtle quiet moment that you can see from 2 characters that can make the reader look at this and make a story of their own as to how they met or if they were longtime friends etc. etc. What you need to work on looking at this piece is anatomy and proportions. Use reference for clothes so you can see how they fold. Pay attention to the light source and apply light highlights to some of the forms. Great job on this piece and can't wait to see more
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raichmann [2018-11-11 17:59:30 +0000 UTC]
Hello !
I'm from
Really like the ideia for this piece, the writning on the description gives much needed context for it and easly explains whats happening in it.
The shading in the rocks was made using variations of the stamp on Krita right ? It looks very good by itself but the lack of variation on the shadows that should be over it makes it looks a bit flat, i'm not talking about the further away kind of shadowns, those ones are perfectly done, but the shadowns on rocks normaly are not geometric or follow a pattern so the "light" from the night stars shold make the parts closest to the ground seem darker than the higer parts.
The night sky looks great! If you feel experimental you can try to use some other colors for some of the glow on the stars ( very weak purple and orange are great choices ), would be cool to see but it's just an extra really.
For the anatomy i would suggest that you use some free to use poses and adapt them for you characters, after you get confident on your understanding of pose you can start to make your own! But just using free poses for some time will help you understand some of the perspective and movment of your characters. Kate-FoX has some amazing free to use poses!
(like this one :
). I'm saying this mostly because Azhret body doesn't looks quite right. His torso is a bit turned from the point of view but his pelvis and legs are not, parts of his arm seem smaller then should be on such an strong characther ( mostly the arm reaching for the coins ).
Ysma looks pretty good, the shading in the clothes is on point and her face looks a bit distrusting but glad to find someone to help her with her murderous deeds.
Overall i really like it and would love to see more of this story !
English is not my first language so sorry if i made any mistakes here and if you have any doubts feel free to ask me or other members of the Project Comment community!
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Gequibren In reply to raichmann [2018-11-11 18:14:28 +0000 UTC]
Hey thanks for the long comment
I'm agree with your improvement ideas, I've been thinking about the same things since I made this pic but I wanted an external confirmation
PS: By the way, your English is good
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raichmann In reply to Gequibren [2018-11-11 22:28:51 +0000 UTC]
You are welcome
And thanks ! I'm trying to get better at it, and knowing it's actually geting better is great
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lazulimoon [2018-11-04 15:40:52 +0000 UTC]
I am in love with the way you coloured and shaded this piece! The only thing that I would change abit is the anatomy, just keep practising on that and everything is gonna tie together wonderfully!
Over all I really enjoy the expressions of the characters as well! Keep up the good work!
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lazulimoon In reply to Gequibren [2018-11-06 13:43:21 +0000 UTC]
I'd say focusing more on the torso area as well as the arms. Keep up the hard work!
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LeilaAscariz [2018-01-02 17:49:18 +0000 UTC]
Me alegro que te hayas unido también a este!!! Me encantan los personajes de Sylessae y les has hecho justicia!!!
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LeilaAscariz In reply to Gequibren [2018-01-03 10:16:06 +0000 UTC]
Ya se lo dije yo a Sylessae, Azhret está abandonado el pobre xD
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Nightroxy [2018-01-02 16:53:19 +0000 UTC]
I love the colors and the expressions, wonderful work! <3
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Gequibren In reply to Nightroxy [2018-01-02 17:52:31 +0000 UTC]
I was not very convinced that people would like Ysma's expression ... I see her a bit strange. And the colors are somewhat muted due to the darkness of the image. Glad you like it !
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Nightroxy In reply to Gequibren [2018-01-02 19:13:40 +0000 UTC]
I think she looks witty and cunning, just perfect for her character! And the muteness of the colors really helps to build the atmosphere!
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Gequibren In reply to ArlenFram [2018-01-02 17:47:43 +0000 UTC]
Thanks !! I usually look at the details of the images I see, so I try to do the same with my own ... the halforc needs more entries !
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sylessae In reply to Gequibren [2018-01-02 17:47:51 +0000 UTC]
I feel honored, thank you again. <3 Lots of love!
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