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Published: 2017-01-06 00:48:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 287; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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I had an interesting concept to make Gerundive at a computer with Gala giving her a virtual hug with a not so pleasant face. Anyway I liked it and how it got done. Dawk gave me a 10/10 what do you guys think.Related content
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Learn how to draw on your phone with your finger (without a styilis)then you can talk
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Well, I'll try again to give you a constructive critique (I really don't feel like a person that should teach anyone to draw).
Pluses:
- quite clean lines on desk, and the monitor
- teeth, fur and shades on wolf are good, maybe canines should be bigger (search for photos of angry dogs and wolves for a reference)
- I'm glad you're experimenting with more detailed backgrounds than before
- light from the monitor
- desks texture seems quite good
Minuses:
- Gerundive's snout is a bit crooked to our side (perspective!)
- the desk seems to be sloping, being higher under wall than next to Gerundive (perspective!)
- Gerundive's paw is in a bit unnatural position (dogs and wolves rarely move their front paws to outside)
- the window is a bit crooked
- the chair is a bit messy
- almost good job with the keyboard, but buttons rather aren't arranged in vertical lines. (I know, I'm clinging to details)
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This is awesome!
i love the idea of it and you did a great job with the lighting and shading!!
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Yeah! It's really awesome!
(I'm terrible at drawing keyboards)
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Lol I referenced it (I cheated) Im going to go back to the rp in a moment
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Am I allowed to say a 30 out of 10? 
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What a complement lol glad I got you back on my page again apparently I just had to do a 30 out of ten to get you on .
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Yeah, sorry about that! 
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