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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave — Bloody hands
Published: 2014-08-09 20:03:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 833; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 0
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Description There's blood
On my hands
Because of everything
I have done
Friends I betrayed
Enemies I fought
Strangers I ignored
I must pay
For my deeds
And now
The blood on my hands
Is my own
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Comments: 44

wolfgirl2403 [2014-08-11 18:45:07 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me of that song "Blood on my hands"  

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to wolfgirl2403 [2014-08-11 21:32:28 +0000 UTC]

In a good way, right?

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wolfgirl2403 In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-08-13 20:50:55 +0000 UTC]

Yup~

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to wolfgirl2403 [2014-08-13 22:48:48 +0000 UTC]

Nice

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wolfgirl2403 In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-08-16 01:17:21 +0000 UTC]

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EvilScarrlett [2014-08-11 17:13:59 +0000 UTC]

very nicely constructed.

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to EvilScarrlett [2014-08-11 21:32:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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EvilScarrlett In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-08-14 18:02:12 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to EvilScarrlett [2014-08-14 20:46:17 +0000 UTC]

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FainedFreckledFreak [2014-08-11 16:41:46 +0000 UTC]

nice

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to FainedFreckledFreak [2014-08-11 21:32:40 +0000 UTC]

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ChloeSheree [2014-08-10 23:26:16 +0000 UTC]

very nice and flowy, nice subject too

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to ChloeSheree [2014-08-11 21:32:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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ChloeSheree In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-08-11 23:20:07 +0000 UTC]

that's ok

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to ChloeSheree [2014-08-12 21:46:10 +0000 UTC]

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Deadfish-SilentArmy [2014-08-10 14:07:57 +0000 UTC]

Yep, nice subject!

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Deadfish-SilentArmy [2014-08-10 19:19:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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animewolfgirl-ayame [2014-08-10 05:30:58 +0000 UTC]

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to animewolfgirl-ayame [2014-08-10 19:19:20 +0000 UTC]

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Russianbear09 [2014-08-10 03:42:03 +0000 UTC]

This does have a very now flow to it. Even if it is quick, it's really good.

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Russianbear09 [2014-08-10 19:20:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Most of my poems are quick ones, actually

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Russianbear09 In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-08-10 19:32:08 +0000 UTC]

They're all really good too.

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Russianbear09 [2014-08-10 21:59:33 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, thank you

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Russianbear09 In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-08-10 22:24:56 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Russianbear09 [2014-08-11 21:56:14 +0000 UTC]

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KLove4Ever [2014-08-10 00:35:19 +0000 UTC]

I like the flow. Nice one

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to KLove4Ever [2014-08-10 19:19:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I didn't pay much attention to the flow but I'm glad it came out fine

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KLove4Ever In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-08-10 20:48:14 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome my friend  

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to KLove4Ever [2014-08-10 21:59:15 +0000 UTC]

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KLove4Ever In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-08-10 22:07:34 +0000 UTC]

 

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angeluchiha7 [2014-08-09 23:38:39 +0000 UTC]

nice peom

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to angeluchiha7 [2014-08-10 19:20:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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angeluchiha7 In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-08-13 03:44:17 +0000 UTC]

your welcome ^-^

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to angeluchiha7 [2014-08-13 20:18:59 +0000 UTC]

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MagicalJoey [2014-08-09 21:40:31 +0000 UTC]

I like (kinda) how you turned it around at the end with the blood.

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to MagicalJoey [2014-08-09 23:10:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Leonardogirl4eve [2014-08-09 21:13:45 +0000 UTC]

I like this one
Good job my friend

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Leonardogirl4eve [2014-08-09 23:10:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot

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Leonardogirl4eve In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2014-08-10 01:35:05 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Leonardogirl4eve [2014-08-10 22:07:25 +0000 UTC]

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MrDrProfPerson [2014-08-09 21:08:51 +0000 UTC]

Another wonderful poem! Ya never disappoint!
But... should it possibly say "Blood ON my hands," rather than "blood IN my hands?" Just wondering is all. 0u0

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to MrDrProfPerson [2014-08-09 23:11:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. And maybe you're right. I wasn't sure. I'll fix that right away.

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gdpr-26018400 [2014-08-09 20:23:32 +0000 UTC]

No more killing for you!!!
You're going down!

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to gdpr-26018400 [2014-08-09 23:10:06 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, bring it on!

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