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Published: 2009-03-13 19:43:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 132; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 3
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Description I have translated
that which you have not said,
and confess:
I am shifted.
Dissonance written on your brow--
tucked in the corner of your mouth
was almost over-looked.
Would that it were
(to my ignorant content).
Pregnant glances tell more
than any sound reflection
will relate.
And even though our pact of silence
is strained with curiosity,
I will not ask.
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Comments: 3

Toady-kins [2009-03-13 22:42:34 +0000 UTC]

I really like this one...

But the line 'Would that were'... it feels like a word is missing there.

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Gia-Seren In reply to Toady-kins [2009-03-14 00:11:30 +0000 UTC]

You were right. There was a missing 'it' in that line. It has been addressed. Thank you.

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Gia-Seren In reply to Toady-kins [2009-03-14 00:07:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I wrote it on the way to Ashland.

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